Competition: Haiku Over Dathomir

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Haiku Over Dathomir

Write a haiku surrounding the Nightsisters or Tarentum. Info on haiku poetry for reference. Grading based on creativity. 4th-level Crescents.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: [Tarentum] March To Dathomir
Organized by: Master Zsarion Bloodfyre, Adept Farrin Xies Tarentae, Frosty Romanae Tarentae
Running time: 2016-03-01 until 2016-04-30 (2 months)
Target Unit: Clan Tarentum
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Fourth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 12 subscribers, of which 8 have participated.

Results

1st place

Telona Murrage

Member: Telona Murrage
Textual submission: Over a dark world
A dead army waits for us
Our vengeance will fall
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Altheseus Levathan

Member: Altheseus Levathan
Textual submission: Sisters in night
might in sundered life to dust
We make life in ash
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Warlord Etah Obsidyn

Member: Warlord Etah Obsidyn
Textual submission: Dathomir Passerby,
Glowing red dot in the sky.
The Deathsworn descend.
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Saitou Tarentae

Member: Saitou Tarentae
Textual submission: Just fog and witches
Tarentum seeks new knowledge
All death is new life
Placement: 4th place

5th place

Ranarr Kul-Tarentae

Member: Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission: On Dathomir, the
Nightsister know the Dark Side
Better than anyone.
Placement: 5th place

6th place

Geosh Romanae

Member: Geosh Romanae
Submission: Geosh Romanae opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: 6th place

7th place

Scion Tarentae

Member

Scion Tarentae

Textual submission

(The middle one is my "serious" entry. Didn't know if multiple entries were allowed. The other two were funny and I mostly just wanted to share them.)

OK I guess I'll
Try this necromancy thing
How bad could it be?

***

Sometimes I look in
To your eyes. Remembering
When your blood was warm.

***

Supercalifra
gilisticexpeali
docious my haiku.

Placement

7th place

8th place

Constantine

Member: Constantine
Textual submission: The Night Sisters how they scream
The have blood on their hands
The look at me with those screaming eyes
The Laugh at me
Placement: 8th place