Competition: Time to drop the Rhyme.

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Time to drop the Rhyme.

Time for the next phase of our Poetic month. This week I want to see some Multi Stanza Rhyming Poems. Below is an example of a Rhyming Poem

*You have one week to get this done.

Don't wait until the final day.

Make sure that you all have some fun.

Can't wait to here what you have to say.*

This week i want you to be inspired by any Canon, or Non-Canon Star Wars Character(s). So don't Leia round all day. Get this done and Luke forward to the next round.

You must have at least three stanza's to place. You will be scored on Originality, Creativity, Sticking to the rules of the poem, and how well you use the inspiration.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
A Poetic Month
Organized by
Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra, Bobecc Varga
Running time
2016-03-08 until 2016-03-15 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
18 subscribers, of which 9 have participated.
Results
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

The Force had led them to their fate
A confrontation at long last;
Ben had come to confront the weight
That was his enemy of the past.

Once servants of the light
And together they fought for peace;
Yet now stood Vader, ready to smite
Ben knew now, he must cease.

A battle joined, the pieces set
Vader slowly entered Old Ben's net;
The elder's duel once thought a myth
Became another battle of Jedi and Sith.

Ben found Luke across the bay
As Vader pressed his advantage;
Old eyes met new, and Ben knew a way
An apprentice from beyond he could yet manage.

All his training now concluded
A final clash of Titans;
Vader believed he had Ben executed
Yet Ben's power had been heightened.

Though Ben left Luke lost and frightened
His death was not the end;
Ben's swift return in Luke ignited
The Force, becoming young Luke's friend.

Placement
1st place
Member
Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Textual submission

Red.
All I see is red.
You see it, too, don't you?
Or... wait, you're dead.

Death. Darkness.
Covered in back.
You were taken out
By my wicked Force attack.

I am the Dragon.
The Master, the Slayer.
I've ended you like
Pravus killed Krath Soothsayers.

The Ghost Dragon, Death.
The Sith, the Beef,
The one with all the kills.
Whose victims leave no wills.

Lay down your weapons, surrender?
Call it quits, you've lost the drive?
Do you think I leave
My enemies alive?

Switch sides, fight with me.
That's the way for you to be.
And we'll cover every world.
We'll cover every world...
Every world...

In red.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Kryy Vitaan
Member
Kryy Vitaan
Textual submission

Poor, poor Darth Bane,
All that effort creating the rule of two,
Un-fortuna-tely was really all in vain.

I'm sure you could ask any star wars fan,
They were Luke-ing forward to the return,
Of the one who formulated the Sith’s master plan.

Whilst the heads at Disney Leia bout, Satine in their offices,
Tarkin this and that deeming it no longer canon,
They’ve left us true nerds alone to Kryy and pout.

Do not Panaka, I will aven-tress you my lord,
Swing Bly weapon to and fro,
Kill all who oppose you with my mighty laser sword.

So Talis when you will come back,
We can start a war in your honor,
With you to lead the attack.

Kallus foolish or trying too hard,
Whatever it takes to bring you back,
Its that or Disney Organa give us Revan back.

Placement
3rd place
4th place
Quo-Wing-Tzun
Member
Quo-Wing-Tzun
Textual submission

Rough diamond or scoundrel
A blaster for hire
For money, for glory
The chase his desire

His humour as armour
Abrasive and brash
No interest in ideals
Just eyes on the cash

His mask doesn’t hide it
The truth to the lie
Defending his family
To do or to die

Placement
4th place
Member
Keirdagh Taldrya Cantor
Textual submission

There once was a trooper from Tatooine,
His codpiece was always polished to a sheen.
Then one day, wouldn't you know it,
A Wookiee came along and gave it a hit.
The trooper let out a sad little wail,
And ran off to the desert to play snail.

Placement
5th place
Member
Lilith Alema'rha Versea-Stormwind
Textual submission

C3P0 is bright gold
He and R2D2 have been locked in the hold

C3P0 and R2D2 are what you call a droid
The Jawas, they need to avoid

If the hiding place is found and they are caught
Then their mission will be for naught

Placement
6th place
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
7th place
8th place
Qor Kith
Member
Qor Kith
Textual submission

Han Solo, the myth the legend,
He started as a smuggler in space,
Sat in Mos Eisley, he then received an errand,
For a boy and old man, who were in a race.

Luke and Old Ben wanted escape,
To avoid the wrath of the soldiers,
Han Solo's ship wasn't exactly shipshape,
But the beauty avoided being smolders.

Now Han is dead,
By his own son,
Not a single tear was shed,
What has he done?

Placement
8th place
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
Submission
Adept Bentre Stahoes opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
9th place
10th place
Junazee
Member
Junazee
Textual submission

Savage Opress looked out for his brother.
Till Sister came and took him away.
They filled him with power.
Savage then killed his brother with nothing to say.
Now he searches for another.
Hoping his new brother will teach him the way.

Placement
10th place