Competition: Haiku: Week 9

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Haiku: Week 9

Week 9 is your hardest Haiku yet. Really think about each word you present. Subscribe below for your writing prose.

Requirements for participation:

  • Subscribe to the competition, and submit either a .doc, .docx file, or in the text box.

  • No Google Drive Links Will Be Accepted

  • Follow the prompt. If the three judges agree that this hasn’t been done, you will be disqualified from that week’s challenge.

  • This is a haiku, so you must follow the 5-7-5 syllable count, as well the stanza requirement posted in each week's prompt.

  • Satirical entries will be accepted and graded accordingly. If they fail to properly reflect the spirit of the prompt, it will be reflected in the scoring.

  • Do Not Plagiarize! Plagiarism will be reported to the Justicar.

  • Have fun and be creative. Show us what that brain of yours can really do.

This weeks Haiku will be graded out of 60 points:

Spelling/Grammar: 20% Creativity: 30% Entertainment Value: 20% Originality: 30%

Rewards:

  • 1st: 10 points + 3rd tier crescent

  • 2nd: 9 points + 3rd tier crescent

  • 3rd: 8 points + 3rd tier crescent

  • 4th: 7 points

  • 5th: 6 points

  • 6th: 5 points

  • 7th: 4 points

  • 8th: 3 points

  • 9th: 2 points

  • 10th: 1 point

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Twelve Weeks a Haiku
Organized by
Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra, Rosalyn May, Reaver Tra'an Reith di Plagia
Running time
2016-05-27 until 2016-06-03 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
12 subscribers, of which 10 have participated.
Results
Member
General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
Textual submission

So you want to know
About Grand Master Pravus?
(Sorry, *Darth* Pravus)

Well, he killed my friend
and former master, Sarin.
(He had to cheat, though)

Yet now, he's *my* boss -
Sar sent me to train with him.
(To avenge his death?)

Placement
1st place
Member
Headmistress Alethia Archenksova
Textual submission

We will have vengeance
For New Tython, for our friends,
And for Solari.

He is the chaos.
He is the dark force within,
Driving all to hate.

He is our purpose.
Even if he takes what's left,
We will have vengeance.

Placement
2nd place
2nd place
Misium
Member
Misium
Textual submission

While Misium's path
may never cross the GM's,
they fight together.

Under Muz, the light
side was allowed to flourish.
But now things have changed.

Pravus, Plagueis, and
Misum especially
will crush the Jedi.

Placement
2nd place
4th place
Ryan Hawkins
Member
Ryan Hawkins
Textual submission

A wrath has now turned,
What traffic can Light now have?
With Darkness unleashed,

New Tython's ashes,
Cry out in horror for blood,
Will Jedi listen?

There will be many,
Ruins lost in weeping death,
Until his throne falls.

Placement
4th place
5th place
Korroth
Member
Korroth
Textual submission

Who is Darth Pravus?
Who is this spark of hatred,
whose stare burns whole worlds?

Is he a seeker
of power? But for himself
or the Brotherhood?

Is he friend or foe?
Is he a mass murderer?
Or is he just Hate?

Placement
5th place
6th place
Alishu
Member
Alishu
Textual submission

Pravus ascendant
Student of Sarin and Jac
Son of Clan Plagueis

Once the Shadow Hand
He leads the Iron Legion
Dark Lord of the Sith

Undesirables
Beware the Inquisitors!
Flee Pravus's wrath!

Placement
6th place
Member
Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Textual submission

Darth Pravus the Mad.
Undesirables beware.
He will destroy you.

White-robed potentate.
Murderer of Aristan.
Lord of Lunacy.

He heads the darkest.
Depraved killers follow him.
All others are foe.

Placement
6th place
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
8th place
9th place
Lord Halcyon
Member
Lord Halcyon
Textual submission

There was a Pravus
Who once went by as Sarin
Darth names are silly

Pravus is in charge
Ordering around the mob
To do his bidding

Kill all the lighties!
That is the rule of the day
But most ignore it

Placement
9th place
10th place
Aiden Dru
Member
Aiden Dru
Submission
Aiden Dru opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
10th place