Competition: Florrum: A Line Poem

Finished
Florrum: A Line Poem

Write a line poem spelling out Florrum. This competition will be graded on entertainment value.

Competition Information
Organized by
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Running time
2016-04-28 until 2016-05-05 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Plagueis
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Alishu
Member
Alishu
Textual submission

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZMmTYvw4pIM

=The Florrum Song=
F is for friends who do stuff together,
L is for the lightsabers they share,
O is for Odan-Urr, the ones we all hate, DOWN HERE IN THE DEPTHS OF SPACE.
R is for REDRUM, which is what we're going to haveeee,
R is for the red of their blooood,
U is for Undesirable destruccctiiooonn, DOWN HERE IN THE DEPTHS OF SPACE.
M is the final word, it stands for Me and You, here on Florrum togetttheeerrr, and once all the icky Ooooodanites are purged, WE'LL GO OUT FOR ICEEE CREAAAAM.

Placement
1st place
Member
Battlemaster Nefarious "NeMo" Moniker
File submission
Dissappointment.doc
Placement
2nd place
Member
Doku Rivendare
Textual submission

Funny they thought they could fight
Leaving everything to chance
Only to be stomped into the ground
Ravaged across the planet surface
Remains little of what the Jedi held
United they had a chance
Many saw Plagueis change there fate

Placement
3rd place
4th place
Seer Eiko
Member
Seer Eiko
Textual submission

Fear amid the clouds of dust
looming underneath blaster-bolt hail.
Orders, the kind that we know better than to
run from.
Run. Pounding feet on desert soil, sweat and prayers
unheard tangle with screams and pain.
My life, sic semper bellator.

Placement
4th place
Member
A deleted dossier
Submission
The deleted member did not want their submission published.
Placement
5th place