Competition: Get down and give me 20!

Finished
Get down and give me 20!

We've all felt the wrath of our overseer as new recruits. Maybe our performance was sub par that day. Perhaps we forgot to wear pants to lightsaber training and told the instructor it was a new Dun Moch technique. Whatever it was, our leader made sure we never made the same mistake again.

Prompt:

Write a fiction at least 500 words in length - no maximum - that details what your character had done, as a new recruit, to warrant the reprimand they got. Be sure to explain both, the error they made and the punishment they received.

Grading Criteria:

Grading will be based on the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information
Organized by
Azmodius Equesinfernum, Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
Running time
2017-03-02 until 2017-03-09 (8 days)
Target Unit
Clan Plagueis
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
2 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
1st place
Silas Manx
Member
Silas Manx
File submission
Get_Down_and_Give_Me_20.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Obsidian
Member
Obsidian
File submission
Compitition_2.docx
Placement
2nd place