Competition: [Excidium] This is our Anthem Song

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[Excidium] This is our Anthem Song

Write an anthem for Seraph, or whatever planet in the Caperion System you think Excidium should live on. Grading will be based off of the basic fiction rubric.

Competition Information
Organized by
Alara Deathbane
Running time
2017-06-01 until 2017-06-30 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
House Excidium
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fifth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
5 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
General Kell Palpatine Dante
Textual submission

A great and wondrous land
From tree to earth to sand
Many come together as one band
For those who call it an old or new land

This land of ours, what a wondrous place
Full of grandeur and free, open space
Unseen by almost nary a sentient face
Arise like a Phoenix should be the case

A place that we now can make our bed
Our people as one will need to be fed
New animals and plants we will have bred
A gentle reminder of all of our war dead

From the ashes will no longer be hollow
Scholae will now be the one to follow

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Braecen Kaeth
Member
Braecen Kaeth
Textual submission

A poem from the antiquity of Seraph:

Diamonds glistening in the sky
Stars in a field of black above
Silence makes the terror amplify
Civilization, this land is void of

Eyes glinting coldly
We stalk our prey boldly
Prowling with my pack
Fangs of steel
We attack with zeal
howling we attack

A Viking War song from the Old Ages of Northern Seguk.

Placement
2nd place