Competition: Let's Haiku #2: Darkness - Dark Jedi Brotherhood

Competition: Let's Haiku #2: Darkness

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Let's Haiku #2: Darkness

Haiku: "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Haiku about "Darkness"

Text box submissions only.
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Organized by: Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Running time: 2018-02-01 until 2018-02-14 (14 days)
Target Unit: Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 10 subscribers, of which 8 have participated.

Results

1st place

Vorran Shadowfeather

Member: Vorran Shadowfeather
Textual submission: Trapped within the dark
A heart wanting and burning
Loves quickened demise
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Member: Korroth
Textual submission: The blinded hero,
The space under a child’s bed.
Thus, darkness is fear.
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Aurora "Aura" Ta'var

Member: Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Textual submission: Darkness comes quickly
after the sun is fallen.
Come to play again.
Placement: 3rd place

Member: Edgar Drachen
Textual submission: the Black Surrounds me
There is no escape from it
Darkness in my life
Placement: No placement

Member: TonyWhispers
Textual submission: Lonely as loss 'fore its time
Heart of all danger
Its embrace, I find respite
Placement: No placement

Member: Essik Lyccane
Submission: Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement: No placement

Member: Corsair Chrome
Textual submission: Cold and without light
Eternity presses on
Subject to evil
Placement: No placement

Member: Mauro Wynter
Textual submission: Blackness all around
To the core it eats me up
Will it ever stop?
Placement: No placement