Competition: Two Sentence Story #1: Scary

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Two Sentence Story #1: Scary

Write a two sentence story about something scary happening to your character or in his/her surroundings.

Use any writing platform supported by the DB, and grading will be based on creativity, originality, grammar, and... how scary it is.

Competition Information
Organized by
Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Running time
2018-01-18 until 2018-01-31 (14 days)
Target Unit
Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
15 subscribers, of which 12 have participated.
Results
1st place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Arcia Cortel
Member
Arcia Cortel
Textual submission

Hissing and screeching the metal gave way, allowing oxygen and atmosphere to escape the room. The Admiral's heart hammered rapidly in her chest as the airlock began to breach.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Tisto Kingang
Member
Tisto Kingang
Textual submission

Tisto felt the void call out to him, and he in turn called on the Force, steeling himself so he couldn't budge. Yet the void pulled him anyway, ripping him from the floor.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Jack Sewet
Textual submission

Jack looks around the room where he hangs from the ceiling, his hands are in shackles, a black IT-O Interrogator hovers above him, he can see his reflection off of the droids black finish. He sees big beads of sweat dripping down his forehead, and then he feels his mind slowly being broken, he feels all his memories tampered, and the man he was slowly fades away...

Placement
No placement
Member
Edgar Drachen
Textual submission

Edgar finally arrived at the new Jedi Praxeum and he was taken back as to how beautifully the place looked. Then he saw the oppressive and intense the indoctrination of the younglings truly was and he was horrified to his core.

Placement
No placement
Member
Texas UK
Textual submission

Tex woke all of a sudden in a cold sweat💦 from a lovely dream😴 into a nightmare .😬
Rain Pouring,😳 Wind Blowing😥😳 and the Creaking Window getting louder and louder , Something trying to get in😤😤😩

Placement
No placement
Member
Reaper Ryuu Suoh
Submission
Reaper Ryuu Suoh opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Maximus Alvinius
Textual submission

I woke up abruptly to a loud noise in the middle of the night. Scared looking around it hit me right in the nose the worst smell ever... my dog had farted.

Placement
No placement
Member
Ernordeth Puer-Irae
Submission
Ernordeth Puer-Irae opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Sala Fe
Textual submission

Entranced before a waterfall, the strong wind swept Sariel off of his rock and sent him cascading to the rocky depths below. His eyes opened long enough to see the jagged edges of a rock smashing into his sternum.

Placement
No placement
Member
Quii Liang
Textual submission

Maleik the Gray was originally a sith, he was betrayed by them in the brotherhood. On the run Maleik had to go into hiding for years until it was safe to joni the Jedi.

Placement
No placement
Member
Mauro Wynter
Textual submission

Mauro turned around to talk to Chrome, only to find nothingness. In the distance, the sounds of a young child weakly crying was heard.

Placement
No placement