Competition: The Attack of the Haiku - Dark Jedi Brotherhood

Competition: The Attack of the Haiku

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The Attack of the Haiku

Haiku: "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Movie review in Haiku form about how "The Attack of the Clones" made you feel when you watched it.

Text box submissions only.
Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Haiku Movie Reviews
Organized by: Edgar Drachen
Running time: 2018-02-08 until 2018-02-15 (8 days)
Target Unit: Entire DJB
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 12 subscribers, of which 8 have participated.

Results

1st place

Vorran Shadowfeather

Member: Vorran Shadowfeather
Textual submission: Roger Roger Jedi Sith
Cloned Men Fight the Droids to Death
Many fall victim
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Ghost Rulvak Qurroc

Member: Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
Textual submission: Pain and suffering.
Anakin's loss prevailing,
The dark path begins.
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Member: Lord Halcyon
Textual submission: This is the Clone Wars?
More like the Separatist Wars
At least its pretty
Placement: 3rd place

Member: Edgar Drachen
Textual submission: Jango Fett is Daddy
Bugs build something big
Yoda FIGHTS!
Placement: No placement

Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra

Member: Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra
Textual submission: The clone wars begin
With the worst Star Wars Movie.
Dooku steals the show.
Placement: No placement

Member: Lucine Vasano
Textual submission: Dooku and Yoda
A battle long awaited,
Got my heart to race.
Placement: No placement

General Ronovi Tavisaen

Member: General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission: Kind of a bore, but
it's important that we know:
Ani don't like sand.
Placement: No placement

Adept Bentre Stahoes

Member: Adept Bentre Stahoes
Textual submission: jedi generals
droids and general grievous
yet disappointing
Placement: No placement