Competition: [NEMESIS] Create Thy Nemesis

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[NEMESIS] Create Thy Nemesis

Task

Members are tasked with creating a Non-Player Character (NPC) rival or “nemesis” that is befitting of their main or alternative character. Rivals will be created using one of the provided NPC Character Sheet Templates or your own preferred application of choice (Microsoft Word, Apple Pages). Completed characters will feature up to six (6) unique traits (Aspects) and should detail their specializations (Discipline, Skills, Feats) and any other backstory/history you feel like adding.

Resources

  • I recommend using my GDoc NPC Template or Wally's GDoc Template to submit your entry as they are the most "complete" options.
    • To use these templates you must click on "File" → "Make A Copy" and then fill them out.
    • if using my template, you can highlight the skills/powers and drag/drop them to where you want.
  • C-D4WG - Character Sheet Reference — Allows you to view all the information on Aspects, Skills, Feats, and more.
  • You can use any of the pre-written Aspects here if you’re not comfortable creating custom ones.
  • Character Sheet Sandbox - Found in your Character Sheet Administration menu, enables you to experiment with builds/skills. You can take a screenshot and attach the build, or transcribe for your template submission. You can find it on your admin page at the bottom of the "Character Sheet Administration" page.

Rules

  1. Created Nemesis NPCs can be either Force-sensitive or a Non-Force User
  2. Created Nemesis NPCs can be any rank up to your current rank, but may not exceed your rank.
  3. Created Nemesis NPCs should include as much detail as possible while following and adhering to the Character Sheet Guide and Approval Guidelines.
  4. Participants can optionally link an original or reference character image, just make sure you credit your source when doing so! Avatar creation tools like this one can be helpful.

How to submit your entry

  • Participants will submit entries in .pdf, .doc, or .txt format through the submission box on the DB website.
  • If you use one of the Google Doc templates provided in the Resources list, you must submit in .pdf format
    • When viewing the template, click “File” → “Download as” → “PDF Document (.pdf)”
  • Alternatively members can submit a plain text submission to the competition by copy/pasting the following template:
* Name:
* Age:
* Height:
* Weight:
* Species:
* Path/Order/Rank:
* Discipline:
* Character Traits (Aspects):
* Skills:
* Feats:
* Languages:
* Lore:
* Specializations: 
* Notes/Extra:

You are responsible for checking the formatting of your submission, these are just starting points

Scoring

  • Entries will be graded on...
    • Quality of the writing used to create an interesting and well-thought out nemesis to your main/alternative character.
    • Syntax, grammar, originality
    • Completion of the character sheet.
    • NOTE: Special emphasis for submission grading is being added on completion of character WITHIN the Approval Guidelines as your submission will be the main reference point for your nemesis throughout the rest of the series.
  • Placements 1-5 will earn the following point values towards overall placement in the Nemesis Series.
    • First Place: 6 points
    • Second Place: 4 points
    • Third Place: 3 points
    • Fourth Place: 2 points
    • Fifth Place: 1 point
Competition Information
Parent Competition
Nemesis Series
Organized by
General Zxyl Bes'uliik
Running time
2018-03-01 until 2018-03-31 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Results
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
Nemesis_1_Korin_Sloghanner_14185_rev2.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Rian Taldrya
Member
Rian Taldrya
File submission
Nawera_CS_(Create_thy_Nemesis).pdf
Textual submission

Headshot taken and edited in Photoshop from here: https://io9.gizmodo.com/the-beautiful-klingon-designs-jj-abrams-rejected-for-st-1216785197

Aspects taken from the official Database

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Armad
Member
Armad
File submission
Navas_(1).pdf
Placement
3rd place