Competition: Breaking the Wall, Again

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Breaking the Wall, Again

Four years ago, I hosted an event in honor of a film involving a certain Mr. Pool. Well, he's got another movie coming out and I thought I'd give the event another go. You see, Mr. Pool, is known for many things, but one thing in particular stands out about his stories. Mr. Pool has a tendency to break what is known as the "fourth wall" and speak directly to the audience. In honor of Mr. Pool, this fiction event seeks to play on that unique narrative style.

Thus, please compose a fiction of at least 500 words that involves your character trying to protect someone from someone at least as powerful as your character. Grading will follow the official Voice rubric. The Creativity portion of the grade, however, will be based heavily on your use of the distinct narritive style of our favorite red and black spandex wearing super"hero" (i,e. fourth wall breaks among other things). Of course, due to the narritive style in question, realism will be stretched somewhat to accomodate.

Competition Information
Organized by
Warlord Arden Karn di Plagia
Running time
2018-05-18 until 2018-06-08 (22 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
15 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Adept Atyiru Caesura Entar Arconae
Submission
Adept Atyiru Caesura Entar Arconae opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
1st place
Member
Major Sulith Bekett
File submission
DJB_-_Forget_the_Fourth_Wall.rtf
Textual submission

Eilen joins forces with with Kelviin to face off against a 'mean bad man' bounty hunter and that totally unnecessary fourth wall.

Placement
2nd place