Competition: Set Right What Once Went Wrong

Set Right What Once Went Wrong

It's all gone.

Your Clan, the Brotherhood, or maybe even the entire Galaxy, have fallen to some horrible disaster.

And yet, by some strange twist of the Force, an brilliant use of technology, or just a BS Deus Ex Machina, you've been sent back in time to before this horrible event has occurred, with full foreknowledge of the impending disaster. Yes, it's the most cliche fanfiction plot of all time, and I challenge you to make it GOOD! Heh...good luck with that one, kiddies.

In 1000 words or more, tell me a story about how this has taken place, and what you do with the second chance bestowed upon you! You have free-reign to decide what said disaster was, and how you manage to go about stopping it. Do you succeed, or fail? Do you succeed on you first try, or do you need to try it over and over, Groundhog's Day style?

Second Level Crescents to those who place, and Cluster's of Ice as appropriate. Grading will, as usual, be done via the standard grading rubric.

Competition Information
Organized by
Privateer Jon Silvon
Running time
2018-05-23 until 2018-06-21 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
16 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Lieutenant Colonel Len Iode
File submission
1st place
Knight Jinius Griffin
File submission
Textual submission

Hello. Here is my submission. It is 13 pages with spacing adding. If I left it all as one block, it was kind of unreadable. Enjoy. Let me know if you need anything else.

2nd place
Warlord Andrelious J. Mimosa-Inahj
File submission
3rd place