Competition: A:VD3: You're tearing us apart!

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A:VD3: You're tearing us apart!

Using your character(s) and any other given permission to use, write an angsty soap-opera scene involving infidelity or distrust.

Example snippet:

“I cannot go on without you, Smoddo! Please, take me with you!”

The desperate pleas of a ravishing holonovela star, begging her dashing Hutt lover not to leave her reverberated in the cool night air. Before her, Smoddo gave a withering look that struck his opposing star speechless before slithering up the ramp to his shuttle, leaving the grief-stricken woman to curse the contrived set of circumstance that had cost her the love of her life.

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Grading will be based on Voice fiction rubric, with a heavy emphasis on the soapiness of the opera / holonovela and gratuitous humor value. Top three placements earn Crescents. Submissions above 500 words earn Clusters of Ice. Submissions below 500 words get disqualified.

Valid submission formats: PDF, DOC or DOCX.

The overall point values for placement in this competition for the event is as follows: * 1st: 6 Points * 2nd: 5 Points * 3rd: 4 Points

Competition Information
Parent Competition
A:VD3: Prom Night
Organized by
Aedile Tali Sroka
Running time
2019-02-01 until 2019-02-14 (14 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
3 subscribers, of which 1 has participated.
Results
1st place
Magik
Member
Magik
Submission
Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
1st place