Competition: [CNS-PLA Antiquity] Week 1: A Brave, New World

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[CNS-PLA Antiquity] Week 1: A Brave, New World

Many roles are needed any time that Clans of the Brotherhood decide to land upon the surface of a planet. The sights and sounds encountered can be immense and awe-inspiring, or sometimes just boring and run-of-the mill. Using this song to write about the things your character encounters. This could involve any number of threats, vistas or encounters when you are first exploring the planet on a scouting mission. Turn up the music, and let the sound guide your words,

Grading for this competition will be completed by both judges, based on the Voice Rubric and adherence to the prompt. Have fun!

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[CNS-PLA] Operation: Antiquity
Organized by
Bentre Stahoes, Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
Running time
2019-02-25 until 2019-03-04 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Results
1st place
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
Textual submission

The transport shook a little as it entered atmosphere, wobbling as the transition from void to air rocked across its fuselage. A few words flew between the pilots, faces obscured by their helmets, reflecting the myriad sensors and gauges that poured across their eyes.

Thick clouds, invited them toward them, swept across their view by torrents of wind, the occasional pocket swirling open like windows to the green below. The ship banked, pilots recalculating their landing path. The Lambda class dipped lower yet, a wing tracing lines in the clouds before a wave of vapor washed over them, bathing their view in bright fog.

And then the world opened up below them.

Wild and unkempt, the forest snarled at the landing zone in the distance, pale flickering lights marking their way past verdant woods that seemed to stretch further than they could see. The Force sang to them all now, hushed tones and conspiratorial accents retelling the tales of love, of life, of hunger, of loss. There was a look exchanged between them all, half nods and a shine behind their eyes.

No words.

Words would only complicate the feeling.

They all felt it.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Hilgrif
Member
Hilgrif
Textual submission

Hilgrif using the scanner on the planet and saw the mountain and the forest none of these seem of use then he saw it a droid factory made in the old ways of the CIS hilgrif took many scans of this object to help understand the wounder of it and see if he could get any blueprints of the droids of the wonderful tech marvel that was still running. Hilgrif then made plans to take a closer look at this amazing find

Placement
3rd place