Competition: A New Haiku

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A New Haiku

A Haiku is "a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world"

Write a Haiku advertising your Clan to a brand new member of the DJB or What makes your clan great.

  • Text box submissions only.
  • Entries that don't follow the 5-7-5 format will be DQ'ed
  • Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.
Competition Information
Organized by
Augur Edgar Drachen
Running time
2019-03-15 until 2019-03-24 (10 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
14 subscribers, of which 13 have participated.
Results
1st place
Battlemaster Tasha'Vel Versea
Member
Battlemaster Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission

If you like some fun
Come hang out with some cool folks
Naga Sadow, yeah!

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Seer Zujenia
Member
Seer Zujenia
Textual submission

__Arcona__

Watchers, Defenders,
The shadow-bred protectors
Of morality?

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Battlemaster Magik
Member
Battlemaster Magik
Submission
Battlemaster Magik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
3rd place
Knight Hilgrif
Member
Knight Hilgrif
Textual submission

all that are the new
welcome to Naga Sadow
Home of the Sadows

Placement
No placement
Sergeant Kerlos Yeff Surik
Member
Sergeant Kerlos Yeff Surik
Submission
Sergeant Kerlos Yeff Surik opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Novice Deacon Rale
Member
Novice Deacon Rale
Textual submission

Vanity is unknown
Galaxy of Tradition
Only the Worthy

Placement
No placement
Augur Edgar Drachen
Member
Augur Edgar Drachen
Textual submission

Odan-Urr has Hoth
The Best House of the D,B.
Odan-Urr has Hoth

Placement
No placement
Mystic Xolarin
Member
Mystic Xolarin
Textual submission

Naga Sadow will
Empower and enable
Masters of their fate.

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(if I can use multiple stanzas...)

Naga Sadow will
Empower and enable
Members to succeed

Fate will no longer
Dictate the lives of our clan
But will be controlled

Your adventure starts
With a simple answered call
To Sadow's true path

Placement
No placement
Eminent Idris Adenn
Member
Eminent Idris Adenn
Textual submission

The Empire rules all,
Foundation is Galactic,
Palpatine is bae.

Placement
No placement
Warlord Bentre Kairn'tel Sadow
Member
Warlord Bentre Kairn'tel Sadow
Textual submission

oh Naga Sadow
you are such cool space wizards
legends and a Muz

Placement
No placement
Colonel Rhylance
Member
Colonel Rhylance
Textual submission

Shadow Familia
With us, Invicta, we stand
First clan once again!

Placement
No placement
Vanguard Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Member
Vanguard Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
Submission
Vanguard Aurora "Aura" Ta'var opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Privateer Trideo Arkson
Member
Privateer Trideo Arkson
Textual submission

Friends and Clan Unite
To Share in fun and revels
A light in the Dark

Placement
No placement