Competition: What goes around, comes around.

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What goes around, comes around.

Prompt: Well, you've certainly made a name for yourself, haven't you?

However, not all attention is positive. You are out on a mission for Clan Vizsla when you are ambushed and discover that you have a sizeable bounty on your own head! You better do something about this before it gets you killed...

What mission you are on, why you have a bounty on your head, who set the bounty and what you do about it are entirely up to you.

Rules: there is no max word limit though entries must be at least 500 words minimum. Your story should focus on your main or alternative character but NPC's and other characters you create to help tell the story are allowed and encouraged.

Grading: Grading will be done utilizing the Fiction Rubric.

Submissions: submissions should be done via gdoc, pdf or with the submit text field below.

Competition Information
Organized by
High Inquisitor Anderson
Running time
2019-09-18 until 2019-10-22 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Clan Vizsla
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
Member
Warden Lontra Boglach
File submission
What Goes Around, Comes Around.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

Major Hector Ricmore
Clan Vizsla Immobilizer-418 Class Heavy Cruiser
Zsoldos System, Wild Space

A lone figure walked through the hallway, a jaunty tune spilling from his lips. The tune was interrupted by the sharp Clack! Clack! Of armored footsteps. He moved at a steady pace, in no rush to arrive at his destination despite his jovial mood. The crew members of the ship granted him a respectful berth, in part due to his rank, but mostly due to his reputation for being an eccentric if effective officer.

Hector Ricmore, Major of the Iron Legion, was quite pleased. His commission and battlefield promotion had allowed him to afford a new ship, the new A Wing variant currently being utilized by the Resistance in their fight against the First Order. Having a newer vessel was quite exciting for the Pilot, after utilizing an ancient YT-1300 and dealing with the temperamental prototype of the TIE Advanced V1.

The Zygerrian could not help but break out into a smirk as he gazed upon his vessel. 7.68 meters long, with a central cockpit within the long wedge shape. 1 laser canon was attached to each side, with a pair of missile launchers completing the armament. Painted metallic black, with purple stripes and sigils, the A Wing was both aesthetically pleasing and an impressive ship.

Hector settled into the cockpit of the vessel and began his preflight checks. He was pleased to note that the weapons were operational, engine functioning as normal, and the navigational computer had already been set for his trip to Arx. Turning on his on board comm unit he contacted the Immoblizer’s bridge. “Bridge control this is the Lament, are we clear for the test flight?”
The comm unit crackled in response. “You are clear, Godspeed Lament.”

The hangar doors opened wide, allowing the A wing to swiftly exit the capital ship. Hector activated the hyperdrive, the blackness of space replaced by rushing stars. Reaching down the Zygerrian grabbed his data pad, opening his chronometer and setting an alarm for when he would arrive. Trusting in his hyperdrive to get him to his destination he settled down to sleep.

Some Time Later

The shrill ringing of his alarm roused Hector Ricmore from his rest. Blinking drowsily he shut off the alarm before gazing outside his vessel, where stars continued to pass by at an alarming rate.
“...What.” The Zygerrian mumbled in confusion, he should have reached Arx by now.
“Are you working properly?” He questioned, inspecting his data pad. The chronometer appeared accurate and he could not seem to find any fault with the device. “The ship itself then? I swear if I bought defective junk for this price.” The Zygerrian began the process of once again inspecting his ship. Engine working fine, weapons operational, shields online. With growing horror, he looked at his nav computer. “Don’t tell me. Not this. Not the only time I let someone on my ship.”

A thorough inspection of the Nav computer proved those fears to be true. The set course for Arx had merely been a static screen programmed by a slicer, the vessel had actually been set to reach Nar Shadda. Traveling to the Outer Rim was a longer journey than moving between the two set points in Wild Space, causing the discrepancy in Hector’s alarm.

The pilot chuckled. “A sabotaged Nav computer? That’s fine. I was actually worried that we had a technician so incompetent that they could not program a Nav computer properly.” A smirk spread across his lips “This is turning into quite the adventure”

Picking up his datapad he began to sketch out a route back to Zsoldos from Nar Shaddaa. “Let’s see what happens” Hector assured himself.

A Few Days Later

Lament, Cry of the Stars dropped out of hyperspace in front of Nar Shaddaa. Debris ringed the cesspool of a planet, interspersed by the occasional vessel, no doubt up to some nefarious or criminal task.

Hector’s eyes narrowed when he saw some of these vessels approaching; an Aurore Class freighter flanked by 2 HH-87 Starhoppers. Were these ships in league with the saboteur who sliced into his ship?

His comm unit crackled to life. “Hector Ricmore of The Dark Jedi Brotherhood, you have amassed quite a bounty upon yourself. Surrender now and we will make your death quick and painless. Choosing to resist will only prolong your agony. We do hope you pick the second one, it’s been a while before my boys and I had some fun.”

Not bothering to dignify that with a response Hector pushed the A Wing full throttle towards the freighter. Pshew Pshew Pshew! The A wing fired its laser canons. “Wait for it” Hector muttered to himself as he rapidly closed the distance between himself and the enemy vessels; who currently began to return fire. The A wing dipped and dived, avoiding the oncoming blaster fire.

The distance between the ships decreased until Hector could see the pilot within the Freighter. “NOW!” He thought as he fired the proton torpedos aboard his ship, replacements to the usual missiles carried by such a vessel.

Hector pushed his flight stick forward, turning on its ion afterburner for additional speed. The Zygerrian was thrown back into his seat from the sudden acceleration, gripping his flight stick with gritted teeth as he tried to retain some semblance of control over his ship. A sudden shockwave ran through his entire ship and sent a shiver down Hector’s spine. “I’ll take that was a success then.” The Zygerrian said aloud.

He spun his vessel around to deal with the HH-87 Starhoppers. Charred wreckage filled his vision, the freighter and starhoppers reduced to slag floating through space.
Hector’s jaw dropped. “Proton Torpedos alone should not have carried enough of a blast to destroy all three ships. What on earth was that?”
He hadn’t yet targeted the Starhoppers so it was doubtful it was anything involving them.

“The ships nav was sabotaged, could the saboteur have gotten to the torpedo’s as well? But that makes no sense, why would a saboteur bother doing something that could increase my firepower and my chances of escaping the bounty hunters?”

That left the Freighter than. “...were the hunters carrying something unstable aboard? Did they actually expect to win an engagement while carrying something explosive?”
Putting his helmet into his hand Hector gave a sigh at the sheer stupidity he had encountered.

“Hopefully Declan can help me sort this all out. I’m certain he has contacts over at the bounty office.” Hector flipped on his nav computer and set his course for Zsoldos, triple checking that the course was accurate this time.
“Let’s head home Lament.”

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Mauro Wynter
Member
Mauro Wynter
File submission
The_Hunted.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Constantine
Textual submission

Constantine Pin 10484 Clan Vizlsa

Hi l don’t have much time, but l have a story to tell you!. And yes l am talking to you, the young guy in the dark robe trying to look cool in the bar corner, sitting there with no drink!, here have a drink on me Mister.
Right now l have your attention, it all began when my Clan leader sent me on a mission, to grab as much jewels and gold from the other, Clans of the brotherhood, it was a top secret mission of course but l didn’t know that it was a smash and grab, and get the hell out of the brother-hood, as fast as you can job, l thought l could stay and settle, no chance not for me!.
Anyway l went round the usual places, you know back yards, got a hit on a few keys, for some serious, loot.
Another drink bud, you look as though you need one!.
Anyway here you go, my friend!, where was l oh yes! The loot and keys l found the keys to a high profile Clan. I think it’s called Clan Arcona, some House called Qel-Droma, or something like that l thought this would be an easy job, in out and gone, but what did l know l thought l was doing a good job and doing right by my leader, but you know when the nurf hits the fan it goes.
This was a really good set up by someone, l don’t know it smelled like someone, was given a tip off.
And Pazza! They tired to get me, next thing l know, ha l was on a Wanted Poster 5000 credits, would you believe, and Guess who put it out, Bud l bet you can’t guess.
The Big Chef himself, GrandMaster Mav, Jes l never knew l was so popular, lol.
Well l suppose you want me to go with you now, Along that Green Mile, well l have nothing to do but sit here and wait for the clock to tick. Yeah they got me good, and stitched up so tight you need a light saber to cut the bag open, l don’t why l fall for it but l fall for every time.
Well Gov, you know what they say” it’s a fair cop Gov, lol”.
Oh one last drink before we go, shall we make it a large one this time, l got another tale to tell you! .
Oh but that can wait for another time, Gov finished your drink all ready, Okay l am coming Gov, don’t rush me now! Got all the time in the Universe, l sure the burner can wait a bit, longer just for me lol!.
O there’s the Minister wanting his coin and he say a prayer for you!.
Well here you Sir 15 credit coin for you, to say the last prayer for me Sir, Well that’s the last you here from old Constantine, nice talking to you Warden Minister, and it’s Goodbye from me!.

Placement
No placement