Competition: The Brotherhood has Fallen (Alternative History Fiction)

The Brotherhood has Fallen (Alternative History Fiction)

[This is an alternative reality fiction and doesn’t reflect actual Brotherhood events]

The Collective forces have overwhelmed and fractured the Dark Jedi Brotherhood. Riven by civil war and internal conflict, as well as the intensive damage dealt by the Collective, the Brotherhood is in disarray. Clans who were once allies are now pitted against each other for what resources are left, even the Iron Legion itself has shattered. War and devastation has overtaken all that had happened before, a war of Dark proportions.

Suggested format

How does your character deal with this situation?

How has your clan fared with the collapse of the Brotherhood?

Where do your loyalties lie with the collapse of the system?

What will you do next?

I leave the positions of the other clans up to you, you can decide what their fates have been around this event.

How it will be graded:

Grading will be based on the (Fiction Grading Rubric)[]

Min word count: 500

Competition Information
Organized by
Savant Edema R'uh-Kalinor
Running time
2020-10-01 until 2020-11-01 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
16 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Warlord Bentre Sadow
File submission
The Brotherhood has Fallen- 14185.pdf
Textual submission

maybe a little more focused or less than the prompt calls for, but hey

1st place
2nd place
Augur Xantros
Augur Xantros
File submission
Augur Xantros, 11518, Fall of DJB.doc
2nd place
Grand Master Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
3rd place