Competition: Let Us Give Thanks To The Force!

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Let Us Give Thanks To The Force!

What is your character most thankful for? For what are you most grateful, most blessed? A loved on or an ally? A great victory? Write a poem, in whatever form you wish, about the gratitude your character feels! It can be a sonnet, a haiku, or a free-verse!

For ideas, try the Shadow Academy (https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/shadow_academy/courses/11)[Poetry Course].

Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

The top three contestants will be awarded Fifth Level Crescents of course.

Competition Information

Parent Competition: Tython Squadron November Comps
Organized by: Major Jon Silvon
Running time: 2020-11-09 until 2020-11-30 (22 days)
Target Unit: Battleteam Tython Squadron
Competition Type: Poetry
Awards: Fifth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 3 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.

Results

1st place

Elyon de Neverse

Member

Elyon de Neverse

Textual submission

Give my thanks to the Force is now my task,
why i am lighted by her i always ask,
the Force guide my path through the darkness,
thanks of her i am selfless.

Because her bond to me is all my life,
anger or hate is not my stuff,
I am here to help and heal,
thanks to the Force i feel real.

The Force is always around us,
I always have trust,
that she follows good on my path,
but is is only start.

Everything starts and ends,
but the Force alwas stands,
thank you the Force that i am with you,
may the Force be also with you.

Placement

1st place

2nd place

Agate Gua'lara

Member: Agate Gua'lara
Submission: Agate Gua'lara opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement: 2nd place