Competition: Let Us Give Thanks To The Force!

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Let Us Give Thanks To The Force!

What is your character most thankful for? For what are you most grateful, most blessed? A loved on or an ally? A great victory? Write a poem, in whatever form you wish, about the gratitude your character feels! It can be a sonnet, a haiku, or a free-verse!

For ideas, try the Shadow Academy (https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/shadow_academy/courses/11)[Poetry Course].

Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar.

The top three contestants will be awarded Fifth Level Crescents of course.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Tython Squadron November Comps
Organized by
Raider Jon Silvon
Running time
2020-11-09 until 2020-11-30 (22 days)
Target Unit
Battle Team Tython Squadron
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fifth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
3 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Peacekeeper Elyon de Neverse
Textual submission

Give my thanks to the Force is now my task,
why i am lighted by her i always ask,
the Force guide my path through the darkness,
thanks of her i am selfless.

Because her bond to me is all my life,
anger or hate is not my stuff,
I am here to help and heal,
thanks to the Force i feel real.

The Force is always around us,
I always have trust,
that she follows good on my path,
but is is only start.

Everything starts and ends,
but the Force alwas stands,
thank you the Force that i am with you,
may the Force be also with you.

Placement
1st place
Member
Savant Agate Gua’lara
Submission
Savant Agate Gua’lara opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
2nd place