Competition: The Unchained Malady: Champions of Evil

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The Unchained Malady: Champions of Evil

The arrival of a second Unchained strike force in the Orian System presents a much larger problem than either Clan Naga Sadow or Clan Taldryan had anticipated. One group, seemingly unconcerned with proper military doctrine, has made a beeline for Naga Sadow's headquarters at the Temple of Sorrow to capture a powerful artifact held within. The second, after announcing its presence and intent to conquer the system in the name of a new Sith Empire, has struck at various military targets—including the moon of Sepros Minor, the headquarters and primary barracks of the Naga Sadow Warhost Army. The With the Taldryan Armed Forces' arrival, battles have broken out across the Orian System as the two Clans rush to deflect the Unchained assault.

Like other "combat writing" competitions, this competition will focus on a confrontation between your chosen character and a representative of the Unchained forces assaulting the Orian System. Your opponent must be one of the five following NPCs:

(Since Google Docs lacks the tooltips incorporated into CSs on the DB website, info on the various Feats may be searched at the Character Sheet Reference.)

Members may write from the perspective of their main character or alt character. Snapshots for any member-owned characters used must be attached to the submission. If writing the space combat prompt with Korlin Shif, members may use either a starship included in their loadout, or any other starship to which they would reasonably have access (keeping in mind that the focus of the event is one-on-one combat).

Submissions must be a minimum of 500 words, and uploaded in .doc, .docx, or .pdf format. Google Docs links will not be accepted as submissions. Grading will be done according to the Official VOICE Fiction Grading Rubric, with extra emphasis on the Realism portion of the rubric. The top three placements will be awarded second-level Crescents, and will contribute points to overall event placement as described on the main Unchained Malady event page. Clusters of Ice will be awarded per the Voice Competition Approval Guidelines.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[CNS-TAL]The Unchained Malady
Organized by
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
Running time
2021-03-27 until 2021-05-02 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Results
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Unlikely Alliances.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Malisane Sadow
Submission
Malisane Sadow opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Dasha Talus