Competition: Chapter 1: Lost Ruins

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Chapter 1: Lost Ruins

Recap of Parent Competition: Each competition within this series will have a brief prompt with a word bank attached to the said prompt. You are allowed to basically write whatever you want, but the prompt must be used as well as all the words in the bank. The story must be at least 500 words minimum with no cap on words. Each entry will be graded on the Fiction Rubic. Fiction must be in .PDF or Doc. and links to GDocs or the like will not be accepted. Characters that are used must be linked in the text submission part with your upload, and the character you choose to link with a snapshot to the submission (such as your own character sheet) do not need to be linked in the text submission piece. Each competition will last for roughly 30 days.

This month's prompt:

An abandoned and forgotten Dark Sith ruin was recently visited by a quirky archaeologist with a team dedicated to travel in search of lost artifacts. In the midst of the journey to the ruined temple, strange monsters and creatures burst from the forest on Dromund Kaas. Fearing for his safety, the archaeologist bolted in the middle of the scuffle to hide within the ruins. The rest of his group, including his grandchild, was able to escape back to their ship. However, the group begins to worry when they realize that the archaeologist is not with them and they are not able to reach the person. They also know that many of these creatures have reported violent tendencies.

Word Bank: abhorrent, mute, empower, guiltless, thunder

All words should be used and as stated before, the fiction can be anything from the prompt with your Main or ALT character(s) included. NPC characters may be used in addition of the Main or ALT character.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[Fiction Series] World Bank
Organized by
Vorran Shadowfeather
Running time
2021-08-09 until 2021-09-13 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
14 subscribers, of which 7 have participated.
Results
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
Lost Ruins.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Archian
Member
Archian
File submission
Eggs is always better with adventure.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
Ruined.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
Workd Bank 1.pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Nightsister Sinya Ani
Textual submission

The sky above Dromund Kaas was dark with the black clouds of the turbulent storm raging across the deserted valley. Sinya’ni pulled the hood of her red nightsister robes more tightly over her cyan lekku as she picked her way through the rubble of yet another failed Sith temple.

“They never learn,” she mused aloud. The Rutian may have been working under a Sith regime; however, her own beliefs stayed closer to grey. She avoided the cult-like adherence to what was called the Dark Side. To truly empower oneself, you had to let go of the foolish duality of the Force and accept it as one unified source. The darkness comes from the user. To accept that means you can no longer view yourself as a guiltless pawn of a dark agenda and take responsibility for who you are.

A flash of lightning lit up the valley, followed by a deafening thunder. The entrance to the ruins lay only a dozen meters ahead. Malevolent creatures were lurking in the shadows, and the diminutive Twi’lek could feel their eyes watching her. She paused–the archeologist should be nearby, if he was still alive. She reached out with her senses, pushing past the abhorrent creatures now tensed with anticipation, past the dark energies emanating from the mute walls...there, she felt it. The fear, the loathing. She could sense him deep in the ruined temple. She closed her eyes and thought at him *”Hang on, help coming.”*

The creatures were getting impatient. She hadn’t entered their trap yet. Drawing back from her probe and communication with the target, she shifted her focus to the creatures. Three of them were hunkered down in a small cave just to the left of the temple entrance. It was a simple thing really. A tug on a couple stones in strategic spots and the rock face over the cave collapsed. The three unknown hunters pinned beneath and behind several feet of rubble.

Moving on, Sinya’ni entered the temple. It looked much like most other Sith structures. Severe, foreboding, and completely Brobdingnagian. She carefully picked her way through the ruined halls to the waiting scholar. He was truly helpless hiding behind a downed pillar.

“Doctor Livingston, I presume? Come, let’s get out of here,” she said and offered a him a hand out from behind the rubble. “Stay close, we aren’t alone in here.”

“You think? What gave you that impression?” mocked Dr. Livingston, but he accepted the help and followed closely. They were only about halfway to the exit when an angry mutated creature attacked.

“Ahhhhhhhhh! Save me!” cried the cowardly archeologist as he started to run again. But Sinya’ni had the beast sliced in two before he had even rounded the corner.

“Get back here, you big baby!” The Twi’lek called out to him. Reluctantly he came back and they escaped the temple without another incident. Outside however–that’s a different story.

The three pinned gundarks were no longer buried and charged the two sentients exiting the temple. The scholar ran off once more. This time towards the ships.

“Fine! Run off and leave, why don’t you?” Sinya’ni called after him before fading from view. The gundarks circled a few times, trying to figure out where she went. She slowly walked all the way back to her ship. She didn’t even check to see if he made it to his ship safely. She made the liftoff as soon as possible.

“So long you ugly pile of Rocks…”

Placement
5th place
Member
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Submission
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
6th place
Member
General Ood Bnar
File submission
3317_FICTION_Word-Bank_Chapter 1_ Lost Ruins.pdf
Textual submission

Besides Ood, the rest are nameless NPC preset in the prompt!

Placement
7th place