Competition: [Shadows Unveiled] Who Are The Children?

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[Shadows Unveiled] Who Are The Children?

Sitrep

The Brotherhood has learned its first few tangible details about the new enemy approaching their gate. The Children of Mortis, led by a mysterious figure known as The Father and aided by the horrific Seer, more information is needed to better assess and prepare for the threat looming on the horizon.

Undaunted by the danger of this task, you have set off to attempt to learn more information about the structure, history, and capabilities of these Children of Mortis. Strikeout to a planet of your choice (assume there is some form of presence of the Children of Mortis regardless of what planet it is) and describe your daring attempt to gain the information the Brotherhood so vitally needs to learn.

Additional Info

The more successful attempts at gaining information on the Children of Mortis will result in the Brotherhood being able to compile more detailed information about them. That is to say, more or less information will be provided at the close of this competition about this new faction depending on your efforts.

Rules

  • Participants must submit entries in .pdf, .txt, .doc, or .docx format, or use the submission text field (markdown capable).
    • Any entries written in a GoogleDoc must be exported as a PDF for submission.
    • It is highly recommended to submit in a PDF format.
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be disqualified and ineligible for participation or placement.
  • There is no maximum word cap.
  • Your story must be centered on one of your dossier-linked characters, be it your Main, Alt, or other slotted NPCs. Additional NPCs including ones listed on the wiki or created/invented to tell your story in this fiction are allowed and strongly encouraged.
  • A snapshot of the primary character’s loadout must be selected and submitted with your entry via the checkbox submission field on the competition page.
  • This competition will award up to 4 bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words.

Grading

Grading will be done utilizing the official Fiction Rubric.

Competition Information
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn
Running time
2022-01-01 until 2022-01-31 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
First Level Crescents and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
35 subscribers, of which 15 have participated.
Results
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
Who_Are_The_Children.pdf
Textual submission

My manual word count is 5138

Placement
1st place
Member
Headmistress Alethia Archenksova
File submission
[Shadows Unveiled] Who Are The Children.pdf
Textual submission

A ~~ripoff of~~ homage to _[The Screaming Citadel](https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Star_Wars:_The_Screaming_Citadel),_ because Aphra's influence on my character wasn't painfully obvious enough already.

Placement
2nd place
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Chains Unbound.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
General Zxyl Bes'uliik
File submission
voice_whoarethechildren_9056_v1.pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Archangel Palpatine
File submission
7589-WhoAreTheChildren.docx
Placement
5th place
Member
Vorran Shadowfeather
Submission
Vorran Shadowfeather opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
Submission
Adept Bentre Stahoes opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
General Ood Bnar
File submission
3317_FICTION_Shadows-Unveiled_Who-are-the-children.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Malisane Sadow
File submission
Children of Morbis.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Tribune Kanal O'neill
File submission
Sitrep.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
Who Are The Children_.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Archpriest Quentinshadows
File submission
Children of Mortis- Liren supply lines.pdf.PDF
Placement
No placement
Member
Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

Von Ricmore
Clan Vizsla
Concordia, Saxon Naval Forces
Bakura, Wild Space

Von Ricmore visibly shook with unrestrained fury. Gauntleted hands tightly gripped the edges of his seat as the Anzat seethed in rage.

The Seer had been found. Or some trace of her at least. The elusive enemy had finally made a mistake, or perhaps this was some form of providence from the Force.

The Vizsla task force had not even intended to find The Seer. The group had been tracking their Great Hunt target, an ex Imperial named Mar’Vel. After analyzing data from the captured Cantina on the moon of Daemunn the fleet had found their way two sectors over to the planet of Bakura.

Upon arriving at the system the Vizslans encountered far more ships than they expected. Numerous Action VI transports which scan revealed to be carrying a large amount of bizarre cargo, including the crystals the Seer made use of during the last GJW, descended to the planet's surface. A whopping 12 Gladiator Class Star Destroyers were fanned out in a protective blockade to defend the transports.

Learning more about or even capturing The Seer took priority over the hunt. Von pressed a button on the console in front of him, opening up a comm line to the Commander of the Vizsla forces on board the Concordia.

“Deploy the special missions company using the ATR-6 flight. They need to capture one of the Action VI ships. Put them in contact with the Shriek Hawk, its interdiction fields will prevent their target from jumping to hyperspace. The fleet will cover your approach.” Von ordered.

“Right away sir.” The commander responded.

Von shifted focus to the fleet in front of him. While the Gladiator class were not true Star Destroyers, the ships were classified as Cruisers in most databases, the amount present were certainly problematic. Mounted laser cannons, concussion missile launchers and tractor beams present on each ship would make deploying bombers far too costly to be efficent. The Clan would have to make due with its fighters to make the battle last long enough.

Each fleet deployed all of its fighters, the Children of the Force had far more Tie fighter squadrons, but the many X wings among the Vizsla squadrons helped to make up the difference. Even the B wings were deployed but due to the enemy composition they remained closer to the Vizsla ships as defensive gunships rather than their primary role as bombers.

The fleets exchanged turbolaser fire as the Concordia sliced into one of the Gladiator ships, disabling its weapons. The Vizsla fleet focused their fire on a single Gladiator, rapidly breaking its shields and destroying the vessel. The Children of the Force returned fire, breaking the shields of the Rim Runner and setting the vessel ablaze. The ship barely jumped to hyperspace in time to avoid destruction due to its exceptional speed.

Von’s attention was stolen by an incoming transmission from the Special Forces Company.

“We’ve captured the ship and are jumping to hyperspace now. We’ll rendezvous back at Sundari Station.”

“Excellent work.” Von congratulated the group. “The fleet will meet you there.” Von ended the transmission.

“All ships jump to hyperspace now. Make several jumps to lose any pursuers and join up at the Clan Headquarters.”

The fleet jumped to hyperspace, damaged but intact. It was time to see what The Seer wanted with Bakura.

Placement
No placement
Member
Lieutenant Creon Neverse
File submission
Shadow's Unveiled.docx
Placement
No placement