Competition: A Heroic Couplet

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A Heroic Couplet

Stanzaic Pattern

A Heroic Couplet is a rhyming couplet of iambic pentameter, often 'close," that is, containing a complete thought, with a fairly heavy pause at the end of the first line and a still heavier one at the end of the second. Commonly, there is a parallel or an antithesis (contrast) within a line or between the two lines. It is called heroic because in England, especially in the eighteenth century, it was much used for heroic (epic) poems.

Some foreign writers, some our own despise;

The ancients only, or the modern prize.

~ Alexander Pope

Your objective for this competition is to provide a heroic couplet of your own making.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
A Period of Poetry
Organized by
Lieutenant Creon Neverse
Running time
2022-04-01 until 2022-04-30 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
7 subscribers, of which 7 have participated.
Results
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
Textual submission

For glory and honour, we sacrifice;

For Manda, we just hope it will suffice.

Placement
1st place
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission

If you did love me, you would say is thus:
"My heart is forfeit - marriage, we'll discuss."

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Nora Olen
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
Blade Master Aiden Lee Deshra
Textual submission

Of pure spirit, I seek the common good

Your dark fury, pain, evil, understood

Placement
No placement
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Textual submission

Crap! Oh crap! My entry is late again;

That I shall say as I fetch my pen.

Placement
No placement
Member
Warden Lontra Boglach
Textual submission

Some action tamed, some action bold;
Such hypocrisy of the Jedi Code.

Placement
No placement
Member
Sera Kaern
Textual submission

Blade

It is holier then, the blade not stayed,
For it to rend, is its purpose obeyed.

Placement
No placement