Competition: Petrarchan Sonnet

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Petrarchan Sonnet

Stanzaic Pattern

A sonnet is a fourteen-line poem, predominantly in the iambix pentameter. The Italian (or Petrarchan) sonnet has two divisions: The first eight lines (rhyming abba abba are the octave, and the last six (rhyming cd cd cd, or a variant) are the sestet.

Example:

Not like the brazen giant of Greek fame, (a)

With conquering limbs asride from land to land; (b)

Here at our sea-washed, sunset gates shal stand (b)

A mighty woman with a torch, whose flame (a)

Is the imprisoned lightning, and her name (a)

Mother of Exiles. From her beacon-hand (b)

Glows world-wide welcome; her mild eyes command (b)

The air-bridged harbor that twin cities frame. (a)

'Keep, ancient lands, your storied pomp!' cries she (c)

With silent lips. 'Give me your tired, your poor, (d)

Send these, the homeless, temptest-tost to me, (c)

I lift my lamp beside the golden door!' (d)

~Emma Lazarus

Your objective is to provide a petrarchan sonnet of your own making.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
A Period of Poetry
Organized by
Lieutenant Creon Neverse
Running time
2022-04-01 until 2022-04-30 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 1 has participated.
Results
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission

If ever was a time to sit and pray -
to question God's divine intervention
and the stigmata that His only son
bears on his hands, then that time is today.
For bodies line the streets, tears turning gray,
in Bucha, where the "motherland" will rend
child from actual mother and abandon
all dignity. They leave, instead, decay,
a rotten tooth, a swollen eye, a shard
of glass buried in flesh so young, so raw!
It is enough to crack a golem's heart
and tear to shreds the limits of the law.

Placement
1st place