Competition: Feminine Rhyme

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Feminine Rhyme

Patterns of Sound

Rhyme is the repetition of identical or similar stressed sound or sounds. Rhyme is, presumably, pleasant in itself; it suggests order; and it also may related to meaning, for it brings two words sharply together, often implying a relationship, as in the now trite dove and love, or perhaps the more imaginative throne and alone.

Objective

Your objective is to write a short poem using a Feminine Rhyme (or double rhyme). Stressed rhyming syllables are followed by identical unstressed syllables (revival-arrival; flatter-batter). A Triple Rhyme is also a kind of feminine rhyme in which identical stressed vowel sounds are followed by two identical unstressed syllables (machinery-scenery; tenderly-slenderly).

Competition Information
Parent Competition
A Period of Poetry
Organized by
Lieutenant Creon Neverse
Running time
2022-04-01 until 2022-04-30 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
5 subscribers, of which 3 have participated.
Results
1st place
Sage Enzo Dek
Member
Sage Enzo Dek
Textual submission

Stringing myself along the line of forgetfulness,
Attempting to complete every last task: stressfulness,
Believing that I need to fulfill the Brotherhood's topnotchery,
Instead I procrastinate and fulfill my debauchery.

Placement
1st place
Member
General Ronovi Tavisaen
Textual submission

The lost lady scans endless tomes historic
and pictures ancient tombs and edifices -
the mere thought simply manic and euphoric -
a kiss! A kiss from stone to soothe her vices!
She reads and reads until her eyes are weary,
and on her face, she wears a visage dreary.
Does she dread a scholar's pale apathy,
or can she overcome this entropy?

Placement
2nd place
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Textual submission

I grow sick and weary of these poems
But the medals I do love,
Bring me more of these my dove,
I will sing them to the DC as proems.

Placement
3rd place