Competition: [GJW XV Event Long] Fiction - TR-8R Co-Op Fiction

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[GJW XV Event Long] Fiction - TR-8R Co-Op Fiction
This competition is in the [GJW XV Event Long] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 5 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 14.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Objective

TR-8R, an advanced bipedal droid created by the Children of Mortis and capable of assuming the identity of others by projecting a holographic disguise and voice of someone else, has infiltrated the Dark Brotherhood pretending to be a member of your team and is performing a series of traitorous acts that are putting a target on their back and fracturing the trust of their comrades.

Up to two of the comrades of the “traitor” have been dispatched to track them down and stop them. As a team, write what sort of shenanigans and traitorous acts TR-8R has been conducting against your clan and the Brotherhood as a whole while disguised as one of your characters, and what you do in order to stop him.

Rules

  • This is a co-op fiction, meaning two to three (2-3) members will participate in writing a single, cohesive fiction.
  • This competition will award up to 4 bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions.

Submissions

  • Teams must submit two copies, one "clean" document (without comments or track changes) for reading in .PDF format as well as a second "annotated" version where all writers' contributions are clearly marked using comments/color coding by "Version History" in Google documents. Edits and comments in the "annotated" document must be clearly attributable to a team member.
    • You must share the Google Drive document with the event organizers by clicking the blue "Share" button in the top-right corner of the screen and entering their email addresses. Be sure to give full "editing" access when sharing the document (you will see a dark grey pencil icon to the right of the email address entry box). Include a link to your Google doc at the beginning of your "clean" copy.

Teams

  • Teams must be made up of two (2) or three (3) people.
  • You must identify your team members by name and dossier number at the top of your document along with links to character sheet snapshots for each team member.
  • You can create and find manual snapshots by going to the "Possessions and Loadouts" link in your admin menu and selecting the "snapshots" tab.

Word Count

  • Each writer must contribute at least 500 words total and a roughly equal proportion of the total word count. For example, each member of a two-person team must contribute approximately 50% of the total word count, whereas each member of a three-person team must contribute approximately one-third of the total.
  • A writer's substantive edits and comments will be considered when evaluating whether they contributed a sufficient proportion of the document.

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XV: Ascension
Organized by
General Zxyl Bes'uliik, Lord Idris Adenn
Running time
2022-05-28 until 2022-07-06 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
46 subscribers, of which 32 have participated.
Results
Member
Proconsul Rayne Palpatine
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
1st place
Member
Master Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz
File submission
[GJW XV] The Bureau Bandits and the Case of the Haywire Daughter.pdf
Textual submission

[TR-8R Co-Op Fiction - WIP](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X4c87qVEzZs9M3fWbfc0mXmwnqv183X7g6QnNP-4t68/edit?usp=sharing)

The clean copy is attached here and gDoc link above contains the Work-In-Progress copy. This submission was created by:

[Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz - 711](https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/711)
[Thran Occasus-Palpatine - 5101](https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/5101)
[Rayne - 8405](https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/8405)

Placement
1st place
Member
Emperor Thran Occasus-Palpatine
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
1st place
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
2nd place
2nd place
Aylin Sajark
Member
Aylin Sajark
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
2nd place
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
TR8R (5).pdf
Textual submission

Team members:
Zentru'la (712 words, yellow, snapshot attached)
Appius Taldrya Wight (587 words, red, snapshot: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/non_player_characters/83/snapshots/4573/7760 )
Aylin Sajark (679 words, blue, snapshot: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/15685/snapshots/4572/7756)

Google Doc here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AUSjSUDJW-Lu2r78RkR_E3Cbpx4-2qnSFkA-W9F7cDk/edit#

Placement
2nd place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
A Droid In Socks Clothing.pdf
Textual submission

Editing Document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yGYjfIfzKJTsel00I_suTv8fBLkTeCmgLnebWxWNF7c/edit?usp=sharing
Socks = 1731 words
Wally = 1947 words

Placement
3rd place
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Textual submission

Co-op team with Wally/Marick

Placement
3rd place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
(Clean Copy) TR-8R Co-Op Fiction - RuQa.pdf
Textual submission

See here for the annotated copy or in the document: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k7mePXk8KOza_goAbTNUf1MjmFA8yKKlniGM860hjU0/edit?usp=sharing

Snapshots:
Qyreia: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/14369/snapshots/4451/7559
Ruka: https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/non_player_characters/4/snapshots/4497/7609

approx Word counts:
Qyreia: 4380
Atty: 4711

Placement
4th place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
4th place
Member
Obelisk Adherent Rrogon Skar Agrona
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
5th place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
Et tu Lekku (2).pdf
Placement
5th place
5th place
Kaled Atros
Member
Kaled Atros
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
5th place
Member
Lieutenant Creon Neverse
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
6th place
Member
Envoy Lizuni Heraga
File submission
TR-8R Co-Op Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

Contributors

Creon de Neverse: 12097

Alethia Archenksova: 14287

Revak K'Urr: 12656

Placement
6th place
Member
Headmistress Alethia Archenksova
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
6th place
Member
Lynnyaria Meraudstar
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
7th place
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
GJWXV_Coop_Auratavar_Lynnyaria.pdf
Textual submission

By Aura Ta’var(10388) and Lynnyaria Meraudstar(13458)

Placement
7th place
Member
Adept Alaris Jinn
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
8th place
Member
Grand Inquisitor Arden Karn di Plagia
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
8th place
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
TR-8R Co-Op Fiction.pdf
Textual submission

Composition URL: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1h7DrhN8D-6QeHgDFRLP8tOWKXHA361MzFNe7BpaExfM/edit?usp=sharing

Authors (and snapshots):
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
Adept Alaris Jinn di Plagia (https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/9426/snapshots/4442/7550)
Warlord Arden Karn di Plagia (https://www.darkjedibrotherhood.com/members/13299/snapshots/4479/7588)

Placement
8th place
Member
Malisane Sadow
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
9th place
Member
Adept DarkHawk Sadow
File submission
Co-Op w_Malisane Competition_ [GJW XV Event Long] Fiction - TR-8R Co-Op Fiction (1).pdf
Textual submission

Here is the co=op submission for DarkHawk #264 and Malisane #6169

and here is our link to gdoc

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mpRk9n2XO9x4yJOS43oln24nio7szDYSYIk6V3u5-cg/edit?usp=drivesdk

Placement
9th place
Member
Primarch Yuki Suoh
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
10th place
10th place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
10th place
Member
Adept Celevon Werd'a
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
10th place
Member
Ashia Kagan Keibatsu
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Vorran Shadowfeather
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
tr-8r clean.pdf
Textual submission

submitting for Ashia Kagan Keibatsu 6353 and Muz Ashen Keibatsu 3714

Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
clean TR-8R Co-Op Fiction 14185-14192.pdf
Textual submission

please email me or DM me on Discord if you have any issues with our entry. We have made strides to abide and adhere to the details in the competition. *-Bentre (14185) and Tasha'Vel (14192)*

Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
Textual submission

Manually added by Master Idris Adenn

Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Coop Fiction Clean Version.pdf
Placement
No placement