Competition: [GJW XV Phase I] Fiction - Against All Odds

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[GJW XV Phase I] Fiction - Against All Odds
This competition is in the [GJW XV Phase I] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 3 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 13.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

The clans will have to hold their own systems. This buys us time, at least some. Time we desperately need.
— Darth Nehalem

During the explosive conflict on Dandoran, a mysterious new group unleashed chaos and destruction on the Severian Principate, Tenixir Revenants, and the Brotherhood forces aiding them. Wielding previously unseen powers, the enigmatic Seer and her crystal monstrosities vanished as quickly as they’d arrived, leaving the Brotherhood with little understanding of their purpose or true strength. In the ensuing months, the Grand Master organized a clandestine research program, searching out and retrieving the Force-attuned crystals that seem to lie at the heart of the new threat. The Clans have been provided allotments of crystals, in secret, to try and divine their power and possible applications.

But the enemy has not remained idle. The Children of Mortis have purged their ranks of erstwhile spies and, unknown to the Brotherhood, developed an insidious new method of crystal-infused ascension. Seizing an opportunity, the Children have launched a surprise assault on the capital systems of all seven Clans. In the vanguard, impossible Force-twisted abominations and gravity-defying crystal asteroids have established beachheads in each system. Still reeling from the Collective’s near-destruction of Arx, the forces of the Dark Council are unable to respond in strength. For now, the Clans are on their own.

Against All Odds

Your entry has the chance to shape the direction of the War’s storyline. Higher rates of participation by your Clan in this event will help to mitigate the damage caused by the Children’s Assault. Each Clan is engaged in a defense of its own Theater of War against varying levels of enemy forces, described in the linked news post. Refer to the Wiki entries for your respective Theater for information on the location.

Options

Participants must use one of the following prompts to craft their entry:


Option 1: DEFEND AGAINST THE ASSAULT

Write from the perspective of your main or alternative character and aid in the defense of your Clan’s Theater of War. The enemy’s abominations, crystal-enhanced soldiers, and Force-wielding leaders are overwhelming your Clan’s local defenses, and defeat is a near-certainty. Your primary objective is to hold the line and buy time for the evacuation of civilians and any valuable technology or artifacts that your Clan cannot risk falling into enemy hands.


Option 2: BEHIND ENEMY LINES

You were aboard an orbital platform in your Clan’s capital system when the Children’s crystal asteroid and vanguard fleet arrived. The platform was seriously damaged in the initial assault, and aside from a small boarding party the Children appear to be ignoring it, focusing instead on your Clan’s still-active defenses and fortifying the asteroid impact craters. Your primary objective is to take advantage of your position behind the main assault forces and launch a covert attack on their orbital supply lines in an attempt to disrupt the flow of reinforcements to the surface. But first you need to get a ship and escape the failing platform.


Rules

  • Entries must be submitted in .pdf or .txt format or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website.
    • No GoogleDoc links or .DOC files, please download as a .pdf using "File" -> "Download as" "PDF Document (.pdf)" and submit through the website
    • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be disqualified and ineligible for participation or placement.
  • Your story should be centered on your main character or alternative character. Slotted NPCs, Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around either your main character or alternative character.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XV: Ascension
Organized by
Lord Dacien Victae, Lord Idris Adenn
Running time
2022-05-28 until 2022-06-12 (16 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
58 subscribers, of which 35 have participated.
Results
Member
General Zentru'la
File submission
GJW_2022_phase_1 (3).pdf
Textual submission

Option 2: BEHIND ENEMY LINES
Word count excluding titles etc: 5844
Unit possessions used:
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Placement
1st place
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
The Father Part 2.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
File submission
Ph I Fiction - Against All Odds (1-Defend).pdf
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
Emperor Thran Occasus-Palpatine
File submission
Against all Odds.pdf
Placement
5th place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
Submission
Aedile Tali Sroka opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
6th place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
MarickTyrisArconae-Against All Odds.pdf
Textual submission

For the prompt: Behind Enemy Lines

Placement
7th place
Member
Ellisyn Kendis
Submission
Ellisyn Kendis opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
9th place
Member
Adept Bentre Stahoes
File submission
Against All Odds - 14185.pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
Submission
General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
Participation only
Member
Dr. Aru Law
File submission
Against All Odds.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Grand Inquisitor Lizuni Heraga
File submission
GJW XV Against All Odds.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Grik Spiceminer
File submission
A Slice of Adventure.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Aurora "Aura" Ta'var
File submission
Aura_GJWFic (1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dasha Talus
File submission
[GJW XV Phase I] Fiction - Against All Odds - Dasha Talus.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Meyrath Rizara
File submission
DJB - Against All Odds.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
_Closer._.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Koda Kendis
File submission
Port Defense_ Robin Rose.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Primarch Yuki Suoh
Submission
Primarch Yuki Suoh opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Archian
File submission
Last -blow up- chance.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
Submission
Master Selika Roh di Plagia opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Tribune Kanal O'neill
File submission
Against all odds.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Submission
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Supreme Chancellor Cassandra Oriana Tyris
File submission
Holding the Line.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
Option 1_ Defend.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Ood Bnar
File submission
3317_FICTION_GJW-XV_Against-All-Odds.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Tyga Orn Nilim
Submission
Tyga Orn Nilim opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Krath Adherent Edema R'uh-Kalinor
File submission
BEHIND ENEMY LINES.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Ric "Blade" Hunter
File submission
phase1fiction 3160.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Colonel Shanree Argentin
File submission
Against All Odds.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Centam Javik
File submission
Against All Odds Option 1.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
File submission
Tasha vs Mortis.pdf
Textual submission

I am going with option 1.

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Submission
Warlord Kai Movar opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement