Competition: Bounty Board: Target 1

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Bounty Board: Target 1

Your bounty puck chimes and the voice of Lars Kreeg, a bondsman and middle-man for Clan Vizsla, resonates from the tiny device. Tucked away in the comforts of Yuanming, he sends out a mass message. Illuminated in your hand is an image along with details of a mark that scrolls around it.

Name: Dweebo Sartoona

Species: Rodian

Physical Description: Typical of a Rodian, Sartoona has green scaly skin with black, pupiless eyes, an elongated snout, a bald head, stalk ears, and cupped fingertips. Keeping his body in peak physical condition, his smaller frame is packed with tone muscle, even though he appears to be of a slender build. A noticeable scar can be seen trailing from his left ear stalk to the right side of his neck.

"My contact has instructed me that Dweebo is to be brought in dead or alive. A known slaver, his last known location was too close to home, Ebon Ridge. Not keen on having citizens of Zsoldos kidnapped, you are to locate Dweebo and bring him back to Yuanming. There, you can collect payment."

Details for locations: Yuanming - Ebon Ridge

Details: Grading will use the Voice Grading Rubric

For this competition there will be a 500 word minimum and you will need to bring the target in either dead or alive, the choice is yours.

.pdf and text box submissions are acceptable formats.

Competition Information
Organized by
Gui Sol
Running time
2022-07-18 until 2022-08-01 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Vizsla
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
7 subscribers, of which 5 have participated.
Results
Member
General Kenath Zoron Ad Vizsla
File submission
BountyBoard1-Zoron.doc
Placement
1st place
Member
Reaper Hector Von Ricmore
Textual submission

Hector Von Ricmore
Clan Vizsla
Ebon Ridge, Zsoldos, Zsoldos System

Ebon Ridge was a Hutt slime filled shithole. That thought echoed through the mind of one Hector Von Ricmore. It was not the gambling dens or even those loitering in gang colors which set him off. It was the stench. The revolting, nauseating smell that clung to the slums. It reeked of decomposing corpses and feces which baked in the sun.

Dweebo Sartoona. That was the name of the scumbag which brought Von to this Force forsaken place. The man was a known slaver, one of the few crimes alarming enough to convince the more powerful inhabitants of Zsoldos to take immediate action. On Zsoldos murder was expected; drugs and weapon smuggling were commonplace. But slavery set people on edge. Slavery could bring the attention of the Hutt clans, a dire event the people of Zsoldos sought to avoid at nearly any cost.

It was no wonder that a bounty was swiftly placed upon Dweebo. The Rodian had taken some precautions upon arriving at Zsoldos. He arrived using a false name with documentation to aid his cover as an agricultural merchant hauling produce. These falsification attempts stood no match against the Yuanming network. As the structure houses the only proper spaceport upon Zsoldos, the slaver was forced to land at the hotel. As with all new arrivals the hotel made use of the most cutting edge scans and information retrieval technology available. For most arrivals a single scanning sweep was where things ended. Yuanming cared not for most cargo from spice to weapons, as long as no hostile actions were taken against the hotel. But the varied cages and humanoid sized electro collars revealed a discrepancy in the Rodians story.

The Yuanming leadership reached out to their information network, trading credits and a favor in return for the truth. The Rodian was an infamous slaver named Dweebo Sartoona, an agent of the Hutt cartel hoping to plunder more slaves away from the prying eyes of governments like the New Republic or First Order.

With the truth uncovered the assassins of Yuanming wasted no time posting a bounty. A vast sum of credits to be paid out for the capture of Dweebo and a bonus for any information or action taken against his possible associates. The bounty claimed that Dweebo was last seen traveling towards Ebon Ridge on his personal skiff, accompanied by a personal entourage. Which led to Von’s current predicament.

The Sith waited in the comfort of his personal vessel, a Skipray Blastboat. Small enough to land outside of a spaceport yet powerful enough to do some real damage in combat; the vessel pleased its owner greatly. There was a slight hiccup in that the ship was designed for a crew but offering one of the reserve Vizsla pilots and a skilled medic half the bounty solved that issue nicely.

As for Dweebo, the Rodian had parked his skiff outside of the slums. A trio of Weequay guards watched over the vehicle while the Rodian and his remaining entourage entered a cantina.

It was no small relief to the Pau’an that he would not have to enter such an establishment, at least not yet. Avoiding a slum wide firefight was ideal and the best way to do that would be to not assault a patron inside a cantina. Despite Ebon Ridge’s tolerance of dishonorable duels who could truly say what would happen when enough alcoholic patrons heard the blaster bolts start to fly. The risk of escalation was too great and not worth gaining whatever information could be gleaned from Dweebo’s venture.

Von was content to wait within the safety of his ship, observing the skiff through his Viper probe droid. The droid was painted to blend in against the dilapidated buildings and the Sith had personally tweaked its systems to ensure it would be as quiet as possible. And thus he waited, watching the video stream from the droid on his data pad.

His patience paid off. Dweebo returned with his entourage, a mixed group of Gamoreans and Weequay, as well as a single Nemoidian. They boarded the skiff as a group, the Gamoreans carrying several unconscious individuals. With the passengers aboard the skiff began to travel back to Yuanming.

“Pilot follow them.” Von ordered.

As the ship began to rise the Pau’an focused on his connection to the Viper probe droid, mentally ordering it to follow and kill the guards of the entourage.

Viper flew towards the skiff and began to fire its blaster. Flashes of red light exited from underneath the droid. Most of the shots missed their intended targets, the droid was no marksman and both itself and the skiff were moving at high speeds. A single blast hit the Weequay manning the skiff’s blaster cannon. The criminal fell to the floor of the skiff with a smoking hole in his chest.

“What are you doing? Blast that droid!” Dweebo yelled as he deftly pulled out a blaster pistol and began to return fire. The skiff’s movement did him no favors and his first volley went wide.

The droid then fired its blaster at one of the Gamoreans. The shot slammed into the creature and sent it tumbling from the vehicle with a squeal. A lucky shot from the Rodian slammed into the droid’s eye. It powered off and crashed into the ground.

“What am I even paying you all for? Useless the lot of you.” The Rodian snarled. “Check on the slaves make sure none of them were awoken by the conflict.”

The roar of engines growing closer caused the Rodian to look around in alarm. Turing around he witnessed Von’s Skipray flying closer to the skiff.

“One of you idiots get on the turret and shoot that out of the sky! NOW!” Dweebo screamed.

A Weequay ran for the turret only to be thrown from the skiff when blaster fire slammed into him.

The remaining criminals fired a variety of blasters against the Skipray, their small arms fire doing very little to its heavy shielding and armor.

Von stared down his target from aboard the Skipray. With the piloting delegated he was free to utilize the weaponry with all his expertise. He continued firing upon the skiff, obliterating the blaster turret after killing the gunner. The Skipray then fired into the engine of the skiff, causing an explosion.

The vehicle was moving too fast to come to an immediate stop. It’s momentum carried the vessel towards one of the badlands mountains. The skiff scrapped against the side of the mountain, releasing a shriek of metal followed by a loud explosion. The noise was so loud it irritated Von’s sensitive hearing, even with his ear protection.

“What the frick were they carrying?” The gunner muttered as he ears rang.

“Set us down Pilot.” He ordered. “Double check your armor seals before we leave.” Von stated as he began stripping off his armor. Clad only in his bodyglove he quickly changed into his environmental suit. “Medic, I need Dweebo alive. Perform the procedure on him and spare no expense. I’ll ensure you are properly compensated.”

“Yes Sir.” The pair acknowledged.

Exiting the vessel the trio moved to investigate the skiff. Charred bodies littered the ground, those still alive squirming and groaning in pain. Blaster pistol in hand, Von ended their suffering as the group moved towards the Rodian.

Dweebo was practically unrecognizable. Green skin was damaged by the explosion and charred black by the spice fueled flames.

The medic began to unpack his tools as he prepared to operate.

“Will he live?” Von inquired.

“The procedure will increase his odds but it remains up to the patient. We will have to see.”

Undisclosed location
3 days later

Dweebo felt pain. All he knew was pain. He screamed and screamed until his voice would let him scream no more.

The Rodian’s whole body ached. His arms and legs chaffed, held in restraints which kept him suspended in the air.

“Impressive, you aren’t supposed to be awake yet.”

The Rodian turned to face the sound, fear coiling in his gut.

“You appear to be in pain. Shall I take that away for you?” The voice proclaimed.

As the voice implied the pain Dweebo felt faded. But his fear only increased. This was unnatural. Where was he? Who was speaking? He had to get out. He had to get out.

Dweebo thrashed against his restraints. They held firm against his desperate struggles.

“No need for that. I’m certain we are going to get to know each other quite well.” The voice claimed as it grew even closer.

Dweebo finally got to put a face to the name. Pale scarred flesh and bright yellow eyes. A Pau’an.

“I’ve begun to learn that simply destroying one’s enemies is so very wasteful.” Von began to monologue. “Killing is often necessary and even enjoyable. But the assets of one’s enemies can be made to work for you. You are a slaver Dweebo. To your kind people are an asset, a commodity. I think you may have a point. You see I belong to an organization which has recently suffered some unfortunate setbacks. I’m not the kind of man who enjoys being caught off guard and its time for me to rectify that. In the past my organization encountered a fearsome enemy who utilized cybernetic soldiers. Cold, unfeeling automatons who could overcome pain and adversity. It’s taken myself and others 3 years but we have unraveled the code and made it our own so to speak. You see Dweebo, you belong to me now. That chip in your head marks you as mine. If you remove it, you will die. And when you receive the proper messages your pesky free will is wiped away, allowing you to act as an agent of my design.”

Dweebo shook in terror. He didn’t want this. Couldn’t imagine this. He wanted out. He had to get out.

“I wouldn’t bother escaping. The chip won’t allow you to. Even when in your conscious mind the technology will not allow you to use death as an escape. After you recover I’ll hand you over to the proper authorities. I’m certain the Hutts or some other criminal will still make use of you; no doubt you will find freedom eventually. But you will never truly be free. You are my spy for eternity, a fate worse then death. Truly a fitting fate for one who makes his living taking the freedom from others.” Von remarked with a morbid chuckle as he walked away.

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Vynn Salm
Member
Vynn Salm
File submission
BountyBoardKorvis.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Tribune Kanal O'neill
File submission
Bounty Board Target 1.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Ellac Conrat
Textual submission

“Where’s the Rodian?”

“Look, I’d tell you what you want to know, but you’re gonna have to be more specific! There are tons of Rodians in Ebon Ridge!”

A blue light flickered to life in the darkness, shining off Ellac’s face as he glared down at the Devaronian he had by the throat. The light portrayed the rotating bust of a bounty contract that had been opened on a chosen target, a Rodian with green scales and a tell-tale scar that ran across his face from his left ear to the right side of his throat.

“Dweebo Sartoona,” Ellac said. “I know you know him.”

“Dweebo? That’s who you want? Why didn’t you just say so!,” The Devaronian chuckled nervously. “Sure, I know ‘em! He used to do some jobs for me back in the day! Did some real nice work too, I mean real nice, a professional even! B-but I don’t know whe-“

Ellac tightened his grip around his victim’s throat. “That’s not good enough.”

The Devaronian gasped as he tried to squirm free from the Sith’s grasp. “Okay, okay, I know where he is!”

“Talk.” Ellac said, loosening his grip just enough to allow air to pass through.

Relieved to breathe but now even more nervous, his whole body began trembling. “Well, I mean, I don’t know where he is right now, but-“

Ellac began to squeeze his throat again, but the Devaronian yelped in protest.

“WAIT!, I don’t know where he is right now but I know where he’s going to be!”

Ellac pulled the frightened man up as he leaned close to his face. “You are officially out of breath to waste. Tell me what I want to know, and *ONLY* what I want to know, or I’ll close your windpipe permanently.”

“Okay…,” the man panted. “Okay… The last deal I had with him, he said he hit the jackpot. He told me about a deal he scored with one of the bigwigs of those fancy casinos. Apparently Dweebo was gonna make a trade with this guy for a lot of credits, but that’s all I know, I swear!”

“Where is this deal?”

“He said it was gonna be on the outskirts, a place they call the Scrap Pits! But you’ll need an invitation to get in. They don’t let just anyone in, ya know!”

“So where can I get an invitation?”

”I don’t know, I never got one! It’s all very hush-hush. It’s not like they do the most legal stuff in there! Those deathmatches are brutal!” The Devaronian cried.

Ellac dropped the man, rising to his feet. “That’s exactly what I needed to know. Thank you.”

The Devaronian let out a feeble laugh as he crawled onto his knees. “Hey, no problem! Anytime! And thanks for not killing me, ya know? It’s bad for business...”

“Of course,” Ellac said, drawing his blaster from his holster before firing a bolt through the man’s head. “Don’t mention it.”

•••

The sun had barely set under the horizon as Ellac approached the fence to peer inside the salvage yard. Broken pieces of ship debris and speeder parts collected in mounds scattered throughout the lot.
“The *Scrap Pit*?,” Ellac muttered to himself as he slipped through a hole in the wire-mesh fence. “That’s a bit on the nose, even for me.” Being careful not to accidentally kick any buckets or cause something to shift in the piles, Ellac pressed deeper into the salvage. *‘Still, something in the air doesn’t seem right for a place like this.’* To him, it almost seemed as if the piles of wreckage were breathing, quietly humming deep underneath the surface. *‘It’s too… alive.’*

“That’s the only way we like it.”

Ellac spun on his heel, his lightsaber instinctively drawn, but not yet ignited. The source of the voice, standing above him on one of the scrap heaps was a human like himself, holding his head up to stare down his nose at Ellac.

“How’d you get in here?” His accent was thick, almost like that of an imperial, but the way he said certain words like “Way” and “Like” sounded very similar.

“I got an invitation from a friend of Sartoona.” Ellac said. “I came to see him.”

The man above Ellac burst out laughing, as if he couldn’t contain it if he tried. “You want to talk to Sartoona? You mean, with the bounty on his head and all? *Suuure*, please, by all means, he’d be more than happy to see you!” he said, still laughing to himself. “I mean, really? C’mon, you don’t actually think you can just walk in here and sit down with one of our esteemed guests like you’re old mates from the academy, do you?”

“We all have our delusions.” Ellac said, still staring up at him.

“No kidding, mate.” He said with a smirk. “Tell you what, I like you. So here’s what I’m gonna do. I’m not gonna kill you here, and I’m not an unreasonable man, so how would you feel about being the Scrap Pit’s next contender? You and another fighter step into the ring, fight to the death, and if you win, we’ll let you see Sartoona. Sound like a plan?”

Ellac had to stop himself from smiling at the thought of being in another ring fight. “Alright, I’m in. When do we start?”

“Why not now?” The man said, gesturing to a significantly larger pile of scrap in the middle of the yard. “In that salvage heap is the warehouse, and inside there, the ring, and your opponent is already waiting for you. Just remember not to die, and you’ll get what you came for. Now off you pop!”

Ellac looked over to the warehouse for a moment before making his way over to the large mound. A piece of metal slid out of the way, a doorway opening up to the Scrap Pit inside. The ring was about an eight foot deep recess into the ground, with a four foot fence standing on all sides. An office box sat above the standard seats to provide a better view of the fights. In side the ring, a wookie slave had been thrown into center, clearly more of a prisoner than a willing participant.

“Right this way.” One of the thugs inside gestured to a gate in the fence.

Ellac stepped into the ring, the heat from the bright spotlights bearing down on his shoulders.

Placement
No placement