Competition: [Pro Bowl VII: Week One] Another's Homeworld Locations

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[Pro Bowl VII: Week One] Another's Homeworld Locations

Home field advantage is key in any competition, be it sports or battle. But understanding your enemies home field is required to effectively counter that home field advantage.

For this event, your assignment is to create a description of one of the locations in the home system of another Clan, be it a single shop/structure, large neighborhood, or even space-borne facility. Entries should be at least 200 words, but need not be excessively detailed or set up as a wiki article. The idea is more to create a concept that can be expanded to create an entire location. Who knows, Clan leaders might see your entry as a chance to add something permanent to their clan's canon so you can make your mark on them (though nothing is guaranteed), and even those entries that don't place still might make it onto the DJB wiki. Additionally, remember that the more interesting the idea, the better. Sure, everyone has thought of a cantina and there might be more than a few entries that describe one. If you want to finish well, try to think outside the box!

Entries must be submitted in .pdf, .doc or .docx format, or within the submission text field. To save a PDF from Google Docs, just go to File, Download, PDF Document.

Entries will be graded on:

  • Syntax
  • Originality
  • Quality of Details

This event has a 3x placement modifier.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Pro Bowl VII: Week One
Organized by
Vynn Salm, Supreme Chancellor Cassandra Oriana Tyris
Running time
2023-07-10 until 2023-07-16 (7 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
First Level Crescents
Participants
29 subscribers, of which 14 have participated.
Results
1st place
Essik Lyccane
Member
Essik Lyccane
Submission
Essik Lyccane opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Nora Olen
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Nobilus
Member
Nobilus
File submission
[Week 1] Another's Homeworld Locations.pdf
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Luka Zarkot
Member
Luka Zarkot
Textual submission

The Tower is a dark monolith that dwarfs the rest of the Ascendant Fleet. This space station is an acquisition obtained by Clan Plagueis after a slave uprising unseated its previous owner. Though not as large as the Death Star, this obelisk-shaped station is a monument of galactic design.

Its many floors house hundreds of cells, with a gladitorial ring on the bottom floor and a penthouse at the top. A hangar is located in an outer ring that circles the station.

The cells are arranged around the outside of the obelisk, allowing entry from the outside as well as a view of the center pit down to the ring below.

The penthouse is quite luxurious and contains space for greeting guests as well as the sleeping quarters.

The hangar bay contains smaller ships utilized in bringing in slaves for the games which still occur from time to time.

Though Clan Plagueis uses the games for entertainment, it is also a way for Subjects to prove themselves worthy of citizenship. If a Subject conquers each floor of the Tower and reaches the top, they are given citizenship and a night in the penthouse to celebrate their victory. Many have attempted this, none have succeeded thus far.

Placement
4th place
Member
Dr. Malfrost Xeon
File submission
The Nightflower.docx
Placement
5th place
Member
Warlord Kai Movar
Textual submission

On the plant of Kiast, on the Summit of the Or’ena Mountains sits a small shop for the Jedi studying at the Praxeum. This glass front is lined with pink and white and peering through you can see colours of many hues from ceiling lights highlighting the products contained within. Just inside the door is a small cardboard cutout of a well-known green skinned Jedi smiling up at prospective customers. Above the creature is a white speech bubble that says, “Come in you must, hmm?”

The shelves are full of interesting novelty items including Lightsabre shaped water bottles, Jedi holocron night lights, transparent Jedi robes, joke remotes that fire far too quickly for even the most skilled jedi to defend against, and of course the famous Sith in Carbonite series of action figures.

A prominent display near the cash register in the back of the store contains replica Lightsabers of the delicious candy variety. Each transparent Lightsabre has a different colour denoting its flavour with a depiction of a famous Jedi enjoying the sweet treat on the outer wrapper. Upon closer examination, the products are running a promotion of collector cards for your chance to win an evening with the Consul of Clan Odan-Urr.

Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Celevon Werd'a
Textual submission

The Snakepit Cantina

A locale known for its exotic and/or esoteric ingredients in the offered fare, utilizing galactic folklore or proven results by science. Curry with a sauce made from the secreted adrenal glands of a Corellian Sand Panther to beat a previous run time or amount of repetitions in weight lifting. An aphrodisiac for Mandalorians made from the pulverized, still-beating heart of a vine snake in a glass of tihaar? A tasty and popular treat, if one can get past the gore factor. Another drink uses diluted tree sap in a Coruscanti Ale for its mild hallucinogenic properties.

Not everyone is an adventurous eater or partaker of these exotic tinctures, so there are more common fare for those looking to enjoy the relaxed atmosphere of the Snakepit Cantina. Char-grilled Porg with a citrusy salad? A delectable sampler of various seafoods found throughout the known galaxy in several preparation methods with a fruit puree to cleanse the palate between pieces? Or perhaps a nice Bantha steak, marinated in a blend of spices, ground caf beans and its own blood before being grilled to perfection?

If not for the cuisine, the Snakepit Cantina has a soothing quality in its serpentine motif, aquatic displays and live music.

Placement
No placement
Member
Raistline Taldrya Majere
File submission
IceCream.doc
Placement
No placement
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Estle City.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Archian
File submission
The _Union_ Art Gallery.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Alaris Jinn
File submission
The Greater Orian Menagerie.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Submission
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
Textual submission

Located in one of the floating cities of Essadan on Kiast, the Bad Time Spa is known for its terrible reviews on the holonet and absolutely awful customer service. While locals avoid the spa like the plague and a tourist would never have heard of the spa let alone step foot in the place, it is a complete mystery as to how it has somehow stayed in business as long as it has. The real reason the Bad Time Spa exists is as a facade to hide its true intention. Hidden beneath the spa’s street facing storefront is a retreat for Sith and Dark Side Force users to bathe in the power of the Dark Side and escape the filthy feeling of the Light Side that can be felt all across the planet of Kiast.

Using a combination of alchemy and the Force, the retreat below Bad Time Spa is hidden from the Jedi of Odan-Urr, offering a place for respite for visiting members of the Brotherhood who follow the path of the Dark Side of the Force. Admittance into the true version of the spa is extremely exclusive, a password, which changes every 24 standard hours, must be provided to enter. If a member of the general public does happen to wander into the establishment and refuses to be turned away, they will be subjected to the treatment that has led to the spa’s infamous reputation.

Placement
No placement