Competition: [GJW XVI Phase II] Fiction - Combat Fiction

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[GJW XVI Phase II] Fiction - Combat Fiction
This competition is in the [GJW XVI Phase II] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 3 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 15.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

“Look! It begins,” the Arbiter said, pointing behind them towards the fortress. The Chain began to pulse with energy.

Loremi fell to his knees in a reverent moment of reflection. The Seer cackled again. The Harbinger rolled his eyes and wandered off to kill more people.

The end was nigh.

The Father has begun the ritual to break the Chain of the Force and the Brotherhood fights desperately to stop the Children and their plot. As Brotherhood forces assault the Fortress of the Unchained, you have encountered a high-value target. You must eliminate or incapacitate them in order to break through to the Chain ritual. Time is not on your side.

Objective

Write a combat-oriented fiction detailing the conflict between your character and a high value target. You are to pick one (1) of the following high-value targets.

High-Value Targets

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted as a static file (e.g. .pdf, .txt, .docx) or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. Google Docs links and other ‘live’ documents that can be edited after submission will be ineligible for placement.
    • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Write an action-focused fiction of at least 500 words with no maximum, outlining a combat skirmish with one (1) of the above targets. Entries of less than 500 words will be disqualified.
  • Your story must be centered on your main character or one of your alternative characters. Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story are encouraged. However, your narrative should focus around either your main character or alternative character.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XVI: Transcendence
Organized by
Lord Dacien Victae, Lord Idris Adenn
Running time
2023-09-16 until 2023-10-01 (16 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
26 subscribers, of which 17 have participated.
Results
Member
High Inquisitor Anderson
File submission
Justice 3.1.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Exarch Marick Tyris Arconae
File submission
Marick- Combat Fiction_v2.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Qyreia Arronen
Submission
Qyreia Arronen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
Master Selika Roh di Plagia
File submission
Combat Fiction.pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
Foxen Combat Fiction GJWXVI.pdf
Textual submission

Chose Loremi P'sum vs Foxen Erinos

Placement
5th place
Member
Colonel Shanree Argentin
File submission
Combat Writing Phase II.docx
Placement
6th place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
GJW XVI_P2_Combat Fiction(1).pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Adept Alaris Jinn
File submission
Inevitable.pdf
Placement
8th place
9th place
Nora Olen
Member
Nora Olen
Submission
Nora Olen opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
9th place
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
File submission
Combat Fiction.pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
Envoy Zuza Lottson
File submission
Kerissa - Just One Slice.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Xantros
Submission
Adept Xantros opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Ignatius Blaeceth
File submission
Combat.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Quaestrix Sofila "Sagitta" Douve Armis
File submission
Grounded.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos
Submission
General Socorra Tenebrosa Nhar’qual Erinos opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement