Competition: [VoH Week 2] Haiku

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[VoH Week 2] Haiku

Finding yourself freezing half to death on an ice planet while undergoing rigorous training has put your mind into a state of reflection and even mild euphoria that may or may not be indicative of your body starting to shut down. As you look around at the icy hellscape, you start to feel a bit poetic.

Write a traditional haiku about the natural environment of Hoth through your character's eyes.

Characteristics of a traditional haiku include the following:

  • Structure of three lines with a 5-7-5 syllable pattern

  • Usually un-rhymed, but can be rhyming

  • Focus is on nature and a brief moment in time

  • Uses descriptive language to create visual imagery

  • Captures a moment and creates thought-provoking insight

Grading

Grading will be based on the characteristics outlined before:

  • Structure (30%)

  • Focus (30%)

  • Imagery (20%)

  • Insight (20%)

Event Scoring

Participating in this competition awards points towards the overall event following the scoring breakdown below.

1st place: 4 points

2nd place: 3 points

3rd place: 2 points

Participation: 1 point

Points earned will be multiplied by the competition value modifier.

In the event of a tie, placements will be determined based on the number of competitions submitted to, then by number of first place finishes, followed by second places if necessary and so on.

This event has a 2x point value modifier.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
[VoH] Week 2
Organized by
Furios Morega di Plagia, Azmodius Equesinfernum
Running time
2025-06-25 until 2025-07-01 (7 days)
Target Unit
Clan Plagueis
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
7 subscribers, of which 7 have participated.
Results
Member
Livia Mariquita Daffel
Submission
Livia Mariquita Daffel opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
1st place
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
Textual submission

Haze that never lifts
All looks the same, glowing white
Cold, it is so cold

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Augur J'Kast
Member
Augur J'Kast
Textual submission

White snow blankets all,
Winds howl around my black hood,
Cold is biting pain.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission

Death within the ice,
Yet there's warmth amongst my friends.
Survive together!

Placement
No placement
Member
Blackhawk
Textual submission

Freezing my nuts off
Whilst running my rear end off
Makes Plagues better?

Placement
No placement
Member
Savant Zuser Whuloc
Textual submission

Ewoks are small,
Tauntauns smell gross,
Exit pursued by bear

Placement
No placement
Member
Astralis Violentus
Textual submission

Snow blindness is real.
The cold air burns in my lungs.
Cold, my heart and soul.

Placement
No placement