Competition: [Pro Bowl IX: Week Two] Poetry

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[Pro Bowl IX: Week Two] Poetry

“A Duel Of Fates” by Ricky Rodson

*Blades clash in darkness, *Fates entwined, destiny's dance, *Light and Dark collide.

A haiku is a unique form of poetry as it is short and does not need to rhyme, unlike other poetry types. The poem has a single verse with only three lines of text. The entire poem will have 17 syllables total. The standard count of 5-7-5 will be used for this competition.

How to Haiku

Prompt

All great haiku poems follow a theme, so this year write a haiku about Revelation.

Deep within the jungles of Wayland, the long-abandoned halls of Mount Tantiss lie silent, their secrets gathering dust beneath the mountain. As you explore the forgotten base, what truths do you uncover? Hidden technology? Forbidden experiments? Lost knowledge of the Empire? How do these revelations make you feel—awed, disturbed, tempted, or determined to carry them back to your Clan?

Rules

*Subscribe to the competition and submit in the text box below. *It must follow the 5-7-5 syllable/stanza count. *All work must be your own in its entirety. This means no AI for this competition. *Have fun and be creative!

Grading will be based on format, adherence to the theme and flow.

This event has a 2x placement modifier.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Pro Bowl IX: Week Two
Organized by
Adept DarkHawk Sadow, Supreme Chancellor Ood Bnar
Running time
2025-10-06 until 2025-10-12 (7 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
First Level Crescents
Participants
20 subscribers, of which 19 have participated.
Results
Member
TuQ’uan Varick di Plagia
Textual submission

Broken shards of glass
Memories fade, lives long gone
I don’t like this place

Placement
1st place
Member
Quaestor Rasilvenaira StormRaven
Textual submission

Darkness reigns above
Shattered Empire's heart lays bare
Scavengers feast well

Placement
2nd place
Member
Blade Mistress Shadow Nighthunter
Textual submission

Ancient rites preserved
Secrets in blood discovered
Fiends like me, I purge

Placement
3rd place
Member
Grand Inquisitor "Aequitas" Anderson
Textual submission

Lost in the jungle,
Within the mountains of truth,
All secrets emerge.

Placement
4th place
Member
Ghost Luka Zarkot
Submission
Ghost Luka Zarkot opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
5th place
Member
Vice-Chancellor Narman Losa
Textual submission

Deep beneath the stone
Circuits buzz to life once more
Access secure files

Placement
6th place
7th place
Korvyn
Member
Korvyn
Textual submission

Deep in the tunnels
Darkness gives way to humming
Machines breathing life

Placement
7th place
8th place
Duchess Kora
Member
Duchess Kora
Textual submission

In abandoned halls
Forgotten truths lie hidden
Calling to be seen

Placement
8th place
9th place
Augur J'Kast
Member
Augur J'Kast
Submission
Augur J'Kast opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
9th place
Member
Furios Morega di Plagia
Textual submission

Ichorous green light
Mutant beings in test tubes
Can they be weapons?

Placement
10th place
Member
Nora Olen
Textual submission

Whispers in the dark
Empires sins breathe once again
Plagueis learns, ascends

Placement
No placement
Member
Astralis Violentus
Textual submission

The hype was not real.
Mount TANTISS holds no treasures.
I need some whiskey.

Placement
No placement
Member
Brother Kalen Joss
Textual submission

Ode to Clan Plagueis,
Though Sithy as fuck, Love 'em
Nowhere else is home

*bows*

Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Vincent Brujah
Textual submission

Deep beneath the mount
Dark secrets bring temptation
Truth long forgotten

Placement
No placement
Member
Mandalorian Malodin'Tater
Textual submission

Diving in darkness
Surrounded by evil things
Need to find the prize

Placement
No placement
Member
Master Alaris Jinn
Textual submission

Curse this forbidden
mountain retreat that remains.
Only death can be found.

Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Edgar Drachen
Textual submission

OH something shiney
It shines like silver and gold
House Hoth needs this now!

Placement
No placement
Member
Seer Azler
Submission
Seer Azler opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Golden Envoy Abbey Atty Attiter Ann
Textual submission

Depravity near
Madness you condemn to die
a fault of Darkness

Dare you not rob them
We loved too, we felt like
We were alive too

Even created
Even experiments we
Knew joy along pain

Placement
No placement