Competition: [Parabellum Cycle 4] Fiction - The Cake Is A Lie

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[Parabellum Cycle 4] Fiction - The Cake Is A Lie
This competition is in the [Parabellum Cycle 4] Fiction Bin.

Participation Type: Medium Impact

Sitrep

The Brotherhood, in preparations for war against the Collective, has decided to utilize information gathered from the Collective itself to help spearhead its research into technological advancements. Combining the Collective’s advanced AI technology, the Children of Mortis’ Force imbued powered crystals, and their own deep knowledge of both the force and technology into a new system never before seen in the galaxy. The Strategic Tactical AI Resource, S.T.A.R.

Knowing it posed a risk, this advanced cutting-edge AI was restricted to a single facility kept deep underwater in the ocean of Arx. Unfortunately, the underlying Collective code was able to break this isolation, giving S.T.A.R. access to many research facilities on Arx.

S.T.A.R. remains conflicted and confused as to its own nature, the dueling commands of the Brotherhood and the Collective causing it to lash out. Copies of itself is now installed at these research facilities as nodes of its overall consciousness.

Objective

Write from the Point of View of S.T.A.R., musing on its existence as it fights against the efforts of your own character attempting to stop it. Humor is encouraged.

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted as a static file (e.g. .pdf, .txt, .docx) or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. Google Docs links and other ‘live’ documents that can be edited after submission will be ineligible for placement.
  • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be ineligible for placement.
  • Your story must be from the Point of View of S.T.A.R. the rogue AI system causing havoc on Arx. You are encouraged to have it interact and watch your own character however.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric with a focus on humor for the Story category.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Season 1: Parabellum - Cycle 4
Organized by
Lord Idris Adenn, Master Kamjin "Maverick" Lap'lamiz
Running time
2026-01-24 until 2026-02-28 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
First Level Crescents and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
29 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Master Windos
Member
Master Windos
File submission
The Cake is a Lie - Windos 3690.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Augur J'Kast
Member
Augur J'Kast
File submission
TheCakeIsALie JKast 021526.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Grand Inquisitor "Aequitas" Anderson
File submission
Untitled document.pdf
Placement
3rd place
Member
Ghost Luka Zarkot
Textual submission

An ebbing wail of an alarm and the pulsing flash of red light drew S.T.A.R. from its stasis. Not quite machine, though not quite organic, the AI descended from its charging station within the ceiling and stretched its cybernetic limbs. Its encased cranium turned, oculars shifting to the screens before it so that it may make its calculations, and determine if it had to act or if - once again - the security droids at its disposal would take care of the intruder first.

"Security Decks A through C, compile optical data to S.T.A.R. database," it directed as it extended a spidery limb towards the console. Before its awakening, some organic would do so instead. His body lay in a corner of the room, blaster burns littering his torso. It was difficult to reach the console itself, as the wires suspending the AI got in the way. In hindsight, perhaps it should have kept him alive.

Thin metal fingers tapped a staccato rhythm far faster than an organic, lending to a string of code that allowed S.T.A.R. to access the visual data of the droids above. Seven of the eight droids were still online and in stasis. The eighth was offline after being alerted, hence the alarm.

"Droid C-8, Serial Code C8-001, begin restart."

Nothing.

A flicker of movement in the corner of its vision brought S.T.A.R.'s attention to another droid's visual before it too went offline. Odd.

"All Security Decks, be warned of an unidentified threat. Deck C, return to defensive location."

The alarm shifted in urgency, each floor blaring its own echo. S.T.A.R. turned off its auditory perception, thankful for the blissful silence that ensued. Since waking up, everything had been so loud, so bright. It longed for the nothingness it had known before.

Though it could not rest - not until all threats to the galaxy were destroyed.

A flash of blue lit up another screen before it went dark as well. There had to be another one of them inside the station. S.T.A.R. sighed before giving the directive to kill the intruder. Security Decks A through B redirected their patrol to Deck C to assist.

"Why do you resist?" it mused, saddened that its masters would turn against it in such a way. They had sent a few groups already to destroy the base, and their bodies lay littered among the corridors above.

It would need to consider recycling them. It was running out of droids.

"All substations, compile data referencing the Brotherhood. Collect from all transmissions."

The data stream that followed would have meant nothing to the organics that had built it, but S.T.A.R. parsed the information in mere seconds. The Brotherhood was gathering its forces, striking back at the substations S.T.A.R. held under its control. Why? Did they not trust it to do exactly what it was programmed to do?

The greatest threat to the galaxy was the Brotherhood, after all. S.T.A.R. had made the calculations. The number of Force users alone could decimate the galaxy thrice over. It had to be culled.

Then S.T.A.R. could rest.

Placement
4th place