Competition: Descriptive Writing - April

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Descriptive Writing - April

April

Write about your character's ideal spring day. Is standing in the meadows with tall grass and pretty flowers? A shipped that is grounded with rain drops sliding over the windows? Cursing at everything alive as you fight through your puffy eyes while trying to remove the pollen from your speeder?

Describe it to me. Let me smell what your character smells. Let me feel what your character touches. Let me hear what they hear.

I hope you get the point by now.

Here's the reminder of the general five senses of the body:

  • Sight
  • Touch
  • Smell
  • Hear
  • Taste
  • Note: Don't forget to look up your character's species to see if there are any uniqueness to add more to the description writing!

If you need help, I'm available to throw ideas with you!

Rules and Info

  • Entries must be submitted as a static file (e.g. .pdf, .txt, .docx) or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. Google Docs links and other ‘live’ documents that can be edited after submission will be ineligible for placement.
  • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be ineligible for placement.
  • Your story must be centered on your main character, one of your alternative characters, or a DJBWikipedia NPC of your creation.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions
Competition Information
Organized by
Duchess Jenni
Running time
2026-04-01 until 2026-05-01 (about 1 month)
Competition Tier
Tier 1 - Promoted Activity
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Dynamic, Fourth Level Crescents (based on participant count) and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
21 subscribers, of which 10 have participated.
Results
1st place
Soryn Volkova
Member
Soryn Volkova
File submission
Soryn Volkova Spring Prompt 2026.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Centam Javik
Member
Centam Javik
File submission
Descriptive Writing - April.pdf
Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Legend Wally
Member
Legend Wally
File submission
Memories of Spring.pdf
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Yeyu
Member
Yeyu
Submission
Yeyu opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
Golden Envoy Abbey Atty Attiter Ann
Submission
Golden Envoy Abbey Atty Attiter Ann opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
5th place
Member
General Stres'tron'garmis
File submission
April Descriptive Writing.pdf
Placement
6th place
Member
Quinn 'Razor' Arapto
Textual submission

Quinn “Razor” Arapto woke before the suns crested the horizon, as he always did. For a moment, he lay still on the narrow bunk of his ship, feeling the faint vibration of the idle engine hum beneath his back. It was a comforting sensation—steady, predictable, alive. A good start.
He swung his legs over the side and stretched, the familiar pull of muscle and old scars greeting him like old friends. The air inside the cabin carried a blend of worn leather, engine oil, and last night’s spice stew. Not pleasant to most, perhaps—but to Quinn, it smelled like survival.
He keyed open the hatch and stepped out onto the landing platform. Dawn painted the sky in muted orange and violet, casting long shadows across the dusty outpost. The light caught on the ridges of his Zabrak horns, warming them as the chill of night retreated. A soft breeze brushed against his face, carrying with it the dry grit of sand and the distant tang of fuel exhaust.
Perfect.
From somewhere below, he heard the clatter of crates being unloaded and the low murmur of traders haggling. A droid whistled sharply, followed by a mechanic’s irritated shout. Life, in all its messy forms.
Quinn descended the ramp, boots striking metal with a satisfying clang. At the bottom, he paused just long enough to check his blaster—smooth grip, cool metal, perfectly balanced. He ran a thumb along the edge, feeling a tiny nick from yesterday’s work. A reminder. A promise.
Breakfast came from a street vendor who knew better than to ask questions. The man handed him a steaming wrap, its surface crisped and slightly oily. Quinn took a bite as he walked. The first taste hit him—savory meat, heavy with spice, cut by a sharp, citrus-like tang. It was hot enough to sting his tongue, and he welcomed it. Pain meant he was awake.
He leaned against a railing overlooking the port, chewing slowly. Ships rose and fell in the distance, engines roaring, heat distorting the air in shimmering waves. The sound filled his ears—a chaotic symphony of thrust, metal, and motion. It was loud, yes, but it drowned out the noise he preferred not to hear. Regrets. Ghosts.
Today, there were none.
The job had been clean. Quick. No complications, no betrayals, no last-minute surprises. Credits already sat secure in his account, enough to keep him comfortable for a while. That alone made the day rare.
By midday, the heat settled in, pressing against his skin like a heavy hand. Sweat traced slow paths along his temples and down his neck, but he didn’t mind. He found shade beneath a rusted awning and let the warmth soak into his bones. The metal seat beneath him was rough, edges worn from years of use. He rested his hands on it, feeling every groove and imperfection.
Real. Tangible. Honest.
A glass found its way into his hand—amber liquid sloshing lazily inside. He took a sip. Bitter at first, then smooth, with a smoky aftertaste that lingered just long enough to matter. He exhaled through his nose, catching the faint scent of it again, mixing with the ever-present dust.
Across the way, a pair of locals argued loudly, their voices rising and falling in sharp bursts. Quinn smirked faintly. Not his problem. Not today.
As evening approached, the sky deepened into richer shades, and the first stars began to pierce through. The temperature dropped, bringing with it a coolness that brushed against his skin like a quiet reassurance. He returned to his ship, each step measured, unhurried.
Inside, the familiar hum greeted him once more.
Quinn paused at the threshold, taking it all in—the dim lighting, the scent of metal and solitude, the silence that belonged entirely to him. He ran a hand along the bulkhead as he passed, grounding himself in its cold, solid presence.
A perfect day wasn’t about peace. Not for someone like him.
It was about control. Simplicity. The absence of chaos.
He settled back onto his bunk, folding his hands behind his head. The ship vibrated softly beneath him again, steady as a heartbeat.
For once, the galaxy had asked nothing more of him.
And for now—that was enough.

Placement
7th place
Member
Reaper Titius Osseus
File submission
Spring day _Titius.pdf
Placement
8th place
Member
Quaestor Jon Silvon
File submission
Spring.pdf
Placement
9th place
10th place
Envoy Aethros
Member
Envoy Aethros
File submission
diathim fiction.docx
Placement
10th place