Competition: [GJW XVII Phase I] Fiction - Letters from the Front

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[GJW XVII Phase I] Fiction - Letters from the Front
This competition is in the [GJW XVII Phase I] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 5 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 9.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Objective

Wars never change, nor do those who fight in them. In times of uncertainty, some of us sought to leave a reminder to others that we mattered, that we lived. Others wanted to make sure that the world knew why they fought, and hoped they were on the right side of history. Some just want to make sure their loved ones know that they were thinking about them and weren’t forgotten. Your characters are likely no different. Record a holo to send home, detailing your experiences so far, and how the conflict has affected them. This can be addressed to a specific individual or a simple, generic recording.

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted as a static file (e.g. .pdf, .txt, .docx) or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. Google Docs links and other ‘live’ documents that can be edited after submission will be ineligible for placement.
    • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be ineligible for placement.
  • Your story must be centered on your active characters with a valid character sheet. Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story, are encouraged. However, your narrative should focus on one of your primary characters.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XVII: Animus
Organized by
Councillor Wolfe, Thran Occasus-Palpatine
Running time
2026-05-23 until 2026-06-06 (15 days)
Competition Tier
Tier 1 - Promoted Activity
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
58 subscribers, of which 35 have participated.
Results
1st place
Master Windos
Member
Master Windos
File submission
Letters from the Front.pdf
Textual submission

Ship wiki, for reference: https://wiki.darkjedibrotherhood.com/view/The_Sterile_Field

Placement
1st place
3rd place
Legend Wally
Member
Legend Wally
File submission
Dear Tuiri.pdf
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Medic Tor
Member
Medic Tor
Submission
Medic Tor opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
4th place
Member
Major Putra Karno
Submission
Major Putra Karno opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
5th place
Member
Envoy Zuza Lottson
File submission
Hey Guys - Zuza's Letter from the Front.pdf
Placement
6th place
Member
Master Alaris Jinn
File submission
Datalog15.pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Mandalorian Fenris Skagg
File submission
lettersfromthefrontFenris.docx
Placement
9th place
Member
Ashia Kagan Keibatsu
File submission
Letters from the Front.pdf
Placement
10th place
Member
Adept Raiju
File submission
[GJW XVII Phase I] Fiction - Letters from the Front.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Luka Zarkot
Submission
Ghost Luka Zarkot opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Warlord Hades
Textual submission

To my Mistress Telona,

It has been forever since we have spoken. The years have been long since you left. As I sit here on the edge of oblivion my thoughts turn to you and all of our time together. It seems like a lifetime ago, sitting in the Sword's Sheath among faces that have blurred from my memory long ago. The familiar smell of the asteroid that we called home can still be easily recalled in my mind but so many other things have become foggy with time, and age.

I have found a new home among the Sons and Daughters of Sadow. I am one of them, but then I also am not. I still feel like an outsider even though they have all but embraced me as kin. The station I find myself in life is one I believe you would be proud of. I have amassed glory and riches as well as honor. I command a Harrower-class Dreadnought among a fleet of other starships. I have the ear of the Summit, including Grand Master Muz Keibatsu. I now possess a Raider Corvette for my own musings to do with as I wish. I have all these things but deep down I still feel like a beggar. As if I am pretending. Like these robes hold secrets and lies that I desperately wish to hold in darkness, scared that the light of day will hold both my skin and sins to bare for all to see.

I do not see how to resolve this doubt that has crept up and taken root deep inside me. It is at times like this that I would see your council and wisdom. I would wait for you outside your quarters, or your office, for hours and hours until your duties brought you back. You would look at me and see my conflict within almost instantaneously. You also knew what to say just as quickly. As you taught me the ways of the Krath I began to understand you more bit by bit. We grew was Master and Apprentice for years until I was Knighted and then, well, you know what happened then.

I sit here, in my office off the bridge. It is filled with accolades and trinkets. I have the command of thousands and thousands of people. Yet I sit alone with not one soul for whom I can share any of this with. For I would give it all away to bring you back into this realm. This is why, while I hold the moniker of Sith, I am not sure if I ever could be able to truly claim that title. You taught me to fight with all of my soul and, like you, hold a piece of myself back from the edge of that particular abyss. To have a purpose in what I do and why I do it. Never blindly following others out of fear but fighting with them for glory and honor.

So here I leave you. I am once again moving out to face the enemy. What lays beyond I have no clue but also no fear. If I do fall, please take me to you and promise never to let me go. I still guard these feelings I have, as did you when you drew breath. They, like you, shall never die.

Yours in eternity,

Hades

Placement
No placement
Member
Captain Salvo
Textual submission

Heaps of rusted metal rose into the orange tinted, smog laden sky. Mountains of refuse, forgotten relics, a final resting place. A graveyard for the unwanted.

Acidic rain slowly ate its way through the scrap as it trickled down to a mixing pot of liquids that formed a flowing river of oils, accelerants, coolant, and hydraulic fluids; the lifeblood of machinery.

A sharp and ear piercing clank repeated in the distance like a dystopian bell. If you were to look close enough, wading through the mist. You would see them, the two cloaked figures, more machine than organic, clamoring through wayward piles. Tossing aside undesirables while searching for something more specific. They jabbered to one another in a strange dialect woven with binary. One prodding metal with a makeshift spear while the other melted a large wing segment of a ship into slag with a torch.

Clearly, the one with the spear was in control as a mangled hand stretched out and a cybernetic finger pointed excitedly to an object glowing in the filth. The torch cut off and the other Junker jumped up and clapped its hands before scooping up the cylinder. The softness of the orange light seemed weak, but it was still alive. If that term could even be applied to a seemingly inanimate object.

Chattering back and forth with one another for a brief moment. The leader swung his spear to point in a direction that the other immediately began to move in. They navigated the surface and mounds of debris with a unique expertise as the glowing red eyes on their faces at times flashed before going solid. Processing the sprawling data before them.

The journey of fifty thousand steps brought the two to the peak of a mound overlooking the landscape. The ever present glow in the atmosphere had dimmed but a small light flickered down below. This time the spear pointed multiple times with urgency at an A-Wing that still looked to be in working order. It sat idly by the light, which upon further inspection, would reveal a crooked door made from a slab of metal.

They made their way down towards the light which grew to reveal a ramshackle home built into one of the many inner-weaving tunnels that bore through the matrix of refuse. They couldn't help but to admire the A-Wing with lust and greed flooding what was left of their organic minds. Yet, they knew better as the lightbearer reached out to skim its belly with its fingertips only to be swatted by the leader.

They hushed themselves and approached the door, one on either side as they pushed against each other, both fighting to look through the cracks in the door.

The faint glow came from an assortment of lamps wired to a generator gasping for air. They heard talking coming from an adjacent room so immediately scurried around the side where a flat piece of metal with carbon scoring had made up a wall with a porthole window. Upon looking inside they saw a being not much different than they were. He sat in the middle of the circular space cross-legged as four protocol droid heads perfectly spaced floated around him. Uniquely powered by something as they were not connected to a source by wires but something else entirely.

The bronze flesh of the shirtless being rippled with musculature, his right arm was cybernetic in its entirety and black patchwork pants were worn to cover the legs. Falling down his heavily scarred back were black dreadlocks seemingly tied together with wire.

A PIT droid was busy scouring through an assortment of parts on a nearby table and sitting in a corner chair was a droid the Junkers could not identify.

“They need you, more than they realize.” One of the droid heads spoke.

“They are taking the fight to Oligard's doorstep.”

“No, they threw him away. He doesn't need to go back. He's better off here. With us.” Another head argued.

Sweat flowed from the Kiffar and his face muscles twitched as he fought to concentrate, his eyes clamped shut as a war waged in his mind. He could see the faces of those lost, he could hear the echoes of the dead. The first life he had extinguished.

“Rakkasssss, his blood criessss out.”

“He butchered my friends.” Gui spoke through clenched teeth. “They all did!”

“Calm your mind, friend.” came robotic reassurance from the refurbished Architect droid in the corner.

“I have to go back.” He said between breaths.

“They don't want you back!” Uttered the pessimistic droid head once more.

Gui's eyes opened displaying resplendent emeralds and the heads fell to the floor. Once again becoming lifeless shells.

“So where do you plan to take us this time, Master? You swore to never leave Lotho Minor and you know we can't return to Kiast.”

The PIT droid stopped digging through parts and turned its head towards the former Knight of Allusis and High Councillor of Urr.

“So we'll go to Zsoldos. I still have friends there.”

“Zsoldos…” the droid calculated a response. “Surely you don't mean that lunatic mountain of fur and the little unhinged Aleena?”

Gui smiled. “Why not?”

“I can think of one thousand-three hundred and seventy seven reasons why. Or have you forgotten about that trip to Batuu?”

“Barry, prepare the holo.” Gui spoke, ignoring the warning.

The tiny PIT droid clamored to get on top of the workbench and began to record.

“I tried to rebuild the Order.” He started. “I just wanted what I thought was best for everyone. I grew complacent and neglected to see the true danger. What truly threatened us. My own pride. I was tired.” He hung his head, resting it in his hands. “So tired. Tired of fighting, of depression's stranglehold. Tired of routine. The Light, the Dark. The wrongs, the rights. Differing points of view wrapped in dogma. To whoever is listening to this. It may be my last message. But I can't go out like this. Not in this self imposed exile. I have to help. It's who I am, and to those I've hurt. I'm sorry.” He finished and stood to his feet. “It's better than nothing. Hold onto that for me, Barry. Keep it safe.”

The droid flanked its hand to its chest in a form of salute.

Just then, the door to his abode flung open and the two Junkers stumbled in and fell to their knees. The Architect droid tugged what appeared to be a Lightsaber hilt from its waist but Gui threw his hand out to the side to halt what would have come next.

Gui looked down at the kneeling Junkers as one of them pulled the faintly glowing object from its tattered poncho and raised it like an offering to a god.

“Is that your?” The Architect droid queried.

“My Lightsaber.” Gui reached out with his organic left hand and gripped it. The faintly glowing orange light began to grow in intensity as if it had been reunited with an old friend. “I thought you destroyed it?” He snapped a look to the Architect.

“Let's just say I laid it to rest.”

Gui closed his eyes and ignited it. The dormant Sorian crystal awakened and power surged into a blade once more. Vibrant and electrifying in appearance. The former Jedi panted as he felt at one with it before silencing it with deactivation. He clipped it to his belt and rested his hand on the Junker's shoulder. “Thank you, friend.”

“Barry, ready the Shuttle. You and Xod set a course for Zsoldos. Echo and I need to stretch our legs.” He added, looking out at his A-Wing.

Placement
No placement
Member
Research Director Kadrol Hauen
File submission
DJB-Letter.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu
File submission
Letters from the front.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Corinna Magarin
File submission
Letters from the Front Corinna Magarin.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Raeken
File submission
Letters from the Front.txt
Placement
No placement
Member
Bentre Stahoes
File submission
Letters from the front 14185.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Wuntila Arconae
File submission
Letters from the Front — Wuntila Arconae.pdf
Textual submission

Please find attached my submission in a stylised format. I have also copy and pasted the text below in the event the attached proves hard to read:

# Letters from the Front

> Centaxday
> 3rd Mo., 11th Day, 44ABY
> 18.07

`##BEGIN TRANSMISSION##`

—How does this thing work? Is it on?

_Yes, I think it is. Here, let me check._

`###INAUDIBLE——ERROR###`

`###AUDIBLE: CLICK###`

Thank you, Captain Bly.

_You’re welcome. I’ll leave you be._

`###AUDIBLE: BLAST DOOR OPEN/CLOSE###`

Uh, so…

We found him. The DIA and the OSI tracked him. I don’t suppose you know who the DIA or the OSI are: The Dajorra Intelligence Agency, and the Office of Secret Intelligence. Arcona and Taldryan. Both agencies working in tandem…

I never thought I’d see it, not again in my military career. Not since our Crusade. But we found them.

… All of them.

They fought like animals. Dogmatic, durasteel zealots.

I have participated in many battles, fought many wars. But this—

This was something else.

`###INAUDIBLE——ERROR###`

They kept coming. Wave after wave.

They were… erratic, uncontrolled, and yet… unstoppable.

The durasteel warriors were the worst. A hail of blaster fire from the repeaters giving them cover, and then they... it was like butchery.

We secured that beachhead though. That was our instruction. And we did well. Artillery, anti-infantry, anti-aircraft, mass driver cannons. A shield generator, too. So much firepower for one inconsequential base. Well, we thought it was at the time. We soon found out why it was so heavily fortified. Him. He—

I hate myself for it, but I was so scared… So scared.

`###AUDIBLE: SOB###`

They just kept coming… I know I’ve said that already, but I can’t put it into words. I close my eyes, and I see them now.

Crazed and bald, emerging through the fine soot-like dust. And those basalt columns… _Elizabeth-I_ is… it’s an environment befitting the terror of the battle that took place.

I couldn’t move. I just couldn’t…

`###AUDIBLE: BLAST DOOR OPEN/CLOSE###`

—Oh, welcome back, Captain. I’m still record—

_You have been summoned by the General._

Wh— what? Why?

_Now…_

`##END TRANSMISSION##`

`-*-*-*-*-`

`##BEGIN TRANSMISSION##`

> Zhellday
> 3rd Mo., 13th Day, 44ABY
> 03.48

_Sergeant Tane Craet. Age: 38. Deceased. Taungsday 3rd month, 12th day. Time of death, 00.11. _Elizabeth-I_._

_My name is Captain Bly. I was your son’s commanding officer._

_Sergeant Craet was a fine soldier for most of his career. He fought bravely alongside Arconans and Taldryanites alike. He did both Selen and Dajorra—the light of our star—proud._

_I am, however, obligated to notify you of Sergeant Craet’s dishonour and, as a result, his subsequent execution._

`###INAUDIBLE——ERROR###`

_The Sergeant was observed retreating from the battle. By the order of the Shadow Lord, her Shadow Scion, and the Shadesworn proper, deserters face **The Penalty**._

_Arcona sustains the Dajorra System. It gave you and your son—and his siblings—meaning, purpose._

_To disobey an order is to disobey the Shadow Lord. To disobey the Shadow Lord is to bite the hand that feeds you._

_I would like to say Sergeant Craet took **The Penalty** well; he did not._

_Your son was permitted one last holorecording. At the time, he was unaware of his fate. As is protocol, his last holorecording has been attached as a prologue to this notification

_In due course, Dajorra Intelligence Agency agents shall attend your property. You will comply with their orders._

_By the light of our star Dajorra,_ **Arcona Invcita**

`##END TRANSMISSION##`

`##DELIVERED BY: DAJORRA INTELLIGENCE AGENCY##`

Placement
No placement
Member
Adept Xantros
File submission
Xantros, 11518, Letters from the Front.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Tasha'Vel Versea
File submission
A love letter from the Lekku in Blue Minor (1).pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Velira Morvane
File submission
GJW Phase 1_ Letters From the Front_VeliraMorvane.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Duchess Jenni
File submission
Hello, Myla.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Centam Javik
File submission
Letters from the Front.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Golden Envoy Abbey Atty Attiter Ann
File submission
GJW Family II War Letters-1.pdf
Textual submission

**PLEASE NOTE** all spelling and grammatical mistakes are INTENTIONAL. Literally added back in in many cases painstakingly. This is a "chat/text log" format for the letter and accordingly each character has a voice and writing ability. I tried to format it like a chat export but...best can do without breaking out other tools.

Features Ruka, his husband Cora, and their teenage children Noga (18) and Leda (17).

Placement
No placement
Member
Eeno
File submission
Calling All!.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Padawan Tisto Kingang
File submission
Letters from the Front.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Praetor Seals
File submission
Letters from the Front.pdf
Textual submission

This comes after, and plays off of my Multiprompt: Due Day fiction in the timeline.

Placement
No placement
Member
Tarvitz
Submission
Tarvitz opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
GJW XVII Letter.docx
Textual submission

It's not the letter you wanted to read, but the one I needed to write.

Placement
No placement
Member
Dr. Ben
File submission
Letter from the front..pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Ghost Edgar Drachen
File submission
Letters from the front.pdf
Placement
No placement