Competition: [GJW XVII Phase II] Fiction - Multiprompt: Impact of War

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[GJW XVII Phase II] Fiction - Multiprompt: Impact of War
This competition is in the [GJW XVII Phase II] Fiction Bin. Participating in a competition in this bin for the first time awards 5 points for your Clan. Cumulatively, the placements in this competition are worth 11.0% of placement points in this Phase. See the parent competition for detailed rules.

Sitrep

War. War never changes.

Many lives are affected by the onslaught of war from the civilians in the wartorn areas, the soldiers in the field, and their families back home. There is no avoiding the cost war brings with it. Now here in the Cor’neria system, war is in full swing, and the those affects are felt fully by all it touches.

Objective

Write the transcript of a holorecording recovered from one of the two scenarios provided below during the invasion of the Cor’neria system. These recordings could be recovered from any source, whether from a Liberation Front soldier, a clanmate, your own character, or even a wayward civilian caught in the fray; however, a sheeted character of yours must make a prominent appearance during the transcripts.

Scenarios

  • [Burn the Land] Much of the Nei’kapo is farmland; the few cities that exist are often agrarian communities where farmers congregate to trade goods, or are cities centered around spaceports to offload the excess produce, bolstering the planetary economy. Nei’joule City is one such city, and the sudden quiet of life here is disrupted as a Brotherhood invasion force targets the nearby Oligard Estate.

  • [Boil the Sea] Deep in the recesses of Rath’s Estate, Brotherhood agents discovered a server bank storing the archived data that The Collective gathered on The Brotherhood over the previous decade. The path to access these servers and dismantle the network was hard fought.

  • [You Can’t Take the Sky From Me] Far above the surface of Nei’kapo, the fleets of both The Brotherhood and The Collective are locked in a fierce struggle for superiority. The Isabella Ship Yard has been a point of contention since the outbreak of the conflict. A recovered holorecording details the moment a team of Brotherhood forces breached and commandeered one of two Oligard-class Collective Destroyers.

You are free to use this Audio Transcript Template.

Rules

  • Entries must be submitted as a static file (e.g. .pdf, .txt, .docx) or using the submission box on the Brotherhood website. Google Docs links and other ‘live’ documents that can be edited after submission will be ineligible for placement.
    • If your entry is not PG-13, please make sure to hide your entry by unchecking the “Allow people to view your submission after the competition has been judged” box
  • Entries must be a minimum of 500 words. Any entries that are under 500 words will be ineligible for placement.
  • Your story must be centered on your active characters with a valid character sheet. Wikipedia NPCs, or other characters that you create or invent to tell your story, are encouraged. However, your narrative should focus on one of your primary characters.
  • You must select and submit a snapshot of your main character or alternative character with your entry.
  • This competition will award up to four (4) bonus Clusters of Ice at a rate of 1 per 500 words, in addition to the normal clusters awarded for fiction competitions

Grading

Submitted entries will be graded using the Voice Fiction Rubric.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Great Jedi War XVII: Animus
Organized by
Councillor Wolfe, Councillor Turel Sorenn
Running time
2026-06-13 until 2026-06-27 (15 days)
Competition Tier
Tier 1 - Promoted Activity
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Novae and regular and bonus Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
27 subscribers, of which 13 have participated.
Results
Member
Velira Morvane
File submission
GJW XVII Phase II - Impact of War -VeliraMorvane.pdf
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Medic Tor
Member
Medic Tor
File submission
In Vain.pdf.pdf
Placement
2nd place
4th place
Duchess Jenni
Member
Duchess Jenni
File submission
The Hunted (1).pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
GJW XVII_ Impact of War.pdf
Placement
5th place
6th place
Praetor Seals
Member
Praetor Seals
File submission
Impacts of War.pdf
Placement
6th place
Member
Master Alaris Jinn
File submission
Recovered Holocron Recording.pdf
Placement
7th place
Member
Colonel Len Iode
Submission
Colonel Len Iode opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
8th place
Member
Colonel Shanree Argentin
File submission
GJW XVII Phase II Fiction.pdf
Placement
9th place
10th place
Raeken
Member
Raeken
File submission
Multiprompt Phase 2 Audio Transcript (1).pdf
Textual submission

"Esen Dulle - Loadout 1 - Loadout: Esen-Combat" also used with Praetor Seals permission, but I do not know how to attach that character snapshot, as the upload tool is only allowing me to attach a single file.

Placement
10th place
Member
Quinn 'Razor' Arapto
Textual submission

HOLORECORDING RECOVERY LOG

Source: Recovered Data Fragment
Location: Oligard Estate, Nei'kapo, Cor'neria System
Subject: Quinn "Razor" Arapto
Status: Restored from damaged archive files

[BEGIN RECORDING]

The image flickers to life amid static.

A Zabrak's face fills the frame for a moment before he adjusts the recorder mounted to his chest armor. Deep charcoal-gray skin catches the glow of emergency lighting. Tribal tattoos in faded red and black run down his face, crossing a scar that cuts through his left eyebrow and trails along his cheek. Bright amber eyes reflect the crimson warning lights flashing throughout the corridor.

"Recording active."

The voice is rough from smoke and exhaustion.

"Quinn Arapto. Clan Arcona."

A dull explosion reverberates through the walls.

"If this survives and I don't, someone better make sure it reaches the Summit."

The camera swings outward as Quinn advances through a service corridor beneath Rath Oligard's Estate. The passage is scarred with blaster impacts and chunks of duracrete litter the floor. Emergency klaxons echo endlessly through the structure.

The invasion of Cor'neria had been raging for days.

Now it had come down to this.

The heart of the Collective.

"We knew Rath had hidden something down here," Quinn continues as he moves. "Intel from captured officers kept mentioning archive sectors and preservation nodes. Nobody knew exactly what they meant."

A burst of blaster fire crackles somewhere ahead.

"But people don't fight this hard over supply manifests."

Quinn rounds a corner.

Bodies lie in the corridor—Liberation Front soldiers mixed with Collective security personnel. Smoke drifts across the floor.

The Zabrak steps over them without slowing.

His posture remains tense and predatory. Every movement appears deliberate, controlled. Like a hunting nexu navigating unfamiliar territory.

"Security resistance increased the deeper we pushed."

He glances toward a blast door at the end of the hallway.

"That usually means you're getting close to something important."

The door has already been breached.

Its center bears a ragged circular wound carved by concentrated explosives and lightsaber strikes.

Beyond it waits darkness.

Quinn enters.

The holocamera struggles to adjust.

Then the room comes into focus.

Rows.

Thousands of rows.

Server banks stretching into the distance beneath vaulted ceilings.

Blue and green status lights blink endlessly through the chamber like stars.

For several seconds Quinn says nothing.

"By the Void..."

The words escape him quietly.

The scale of the facility is impossible to ignore.

"This wasn't intelligence gathering."

His voice hardens.

"This was obsession."

The camera pans across the endless archive.

Files stream across nearby terminals.

Brotherhood personnel records.

Military assessments.

Clan histories.

Operational reports.

Psychological evaluations.

Generations of information.

Every secret the Collective could steal.

Every weakness they could identify.

Every opportunity they could exploit.

A decade of preparation.

"A whole war planned before the first shot was fired."

Quinn approaches one terminal.

Amber eyes scan rapidly through the data.

His expression grows darker.

"There are children in these records."

Another file appears.

Civilian populations.

Supply routes.

Medical facilities.

Evacuation plans.

Potential targets.

Potential leverage.

Potential casualties.

The Zabrak exhales slowly.

The muscles in his jaw tighten.

"They weren't studying us."

He stares at the screen.

"They were mapping how to break us."

A warning alarm suddenly erupts throughout the chamber.

ARCHIVE PURGE INITIATED.

ARCHIVE PURGE INITIATED.

The message repeats.

Quinn swears.

"Of course."

Collective leadership had realized the estate was lost.

They intended to erase everything.

He moves quickly.

Years of battlefield experience take over.

No hesitation.

No panic.

Just action.

The camera shakes as he sprints toward a central control station.

Explosions rumble overhead.

Chunks of dust rain from the ceiling.

Around him, Brotherhood teams emerge from neighboring access corridors, securing the facility sector by sector.

Someone shouts for engineers.

Another calls for data specialists.

The purge countdown continues.

Ten minutes.

Nine.

Eight.

Quinn reaches the main terminal.

His darkened fingernails race across the controls.

"I don't need all of it."

He inserts a portable storage cylinder.

"Just enough."

The transfer begins.

The percentage crawls upward.

Twenty-one.

Thirty-four.

Forty-eight.

The archive around him starts shutting down.

Entire rows of servers go dark.

Information disappears forever.

Quinn watches the process with growing frustration.

"Come on..."

His reflection stares back from the monitor.

The scar.

The chipped horns.

The tired eyes of someone who had spent years fighting wars across the galaxy.

For a moment he thinks about how many lives were affected by the files surrounding him.

How many Brotherhood members had been watched without ever knowing.

How many operations had been compromised.

How many deaths could be traced back to this room.

Sixty-three percent.

Seventy-two.

Eighty-five.

Another explosion shakes the facility.

The lights flicker.

Quinn steadies himself against the terminal.

"If anyone reviews this recording..."

He pauses.

"...remember this."

The transfer reaches ninety-three percent.

"Wars aren't won because one side thinks it's righteous."

Ninety-six.

"They're won because someone keeps fighting when it matters."

Ninety-nine.

The final server row begins shutting down.

One by one, lights disappear into darkness.

A decade of secrets dying with them.

Then—

TRANSFER COMPLETE.

Quinn removes the cylinder.

Silence settles over the chamber.

The alarms cease.

The last active server powers down.

Darkness claims the archive.

Only emergency lights remain.

The Zabrak looks around the ruined facility.

The Collective had spent ten years preparing for the Brotherhood's destruction.

Now their network was gone.

Their secrets exposed.

Their greatest weapon reduced to fragments.

Quinn secures the data cylinder to his belt.

A small grin crosses his face.

"Guess Arcona's buying the first round when this is over."

Voices call from the entrance.

Brotherhood forces.

Friendly.

The mission was complete.

Quinn turns toward them.

The recording captures one final image of the vast darkened archive before he leaves.

Then the feed cuts.

[END RECORDING]

Placement
No placement
Member
Research Director Kadrol Hauen
File submission
Transcription.docx
Placement
No placement