Competition: [IG60] Brotherhood's Reprisal (Short)

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[IG60] Brotherhood's Reprisal (Short)

It's time to show the Galaxy who the Dark Jedi Brotherhood is. There have been many wars in Brotherhood history; some on her home turf, some outside of it's jurisdiction. It is time to officially document how the Brotherhood takes down it's enemies and conquers to maintain it's fierce iron grip over the Dark Side of the Force. Describe in free pros (any poetry form you desire, though there must be some poetic structure found in your entry) how the Brotherhood triumphs over it's enemies. This can be in literal terms or in abstract form. Describe in detail how the Iron Throne manages the chaotic units of the Brotherhood to manage victory on the battlefield. How the members react to conflict and war amongst each other to come up on top and become a name to be reckoned with in the Galaxy.

Grading will be made %20 Writing Clarity/fluidity, %20 Form and %40 Creativity and %20 Storyline.

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Competition Information
Organized by
Inquisitor Shaz'air Taldrya, Ascendant James Lucius Entar, Lord Muz Ashen Keibatsu, Augur Windos
Running time
2013-04-13 until 2013-04-26 (14 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 5 have participated.
Results
Member
Warlord Tracinya Beviin Entar
Submission
Warlord Tracinya Beviin Entar opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
1st place
Member
Ernordeth Puer-Irae
File submission
IG60_submission.docx
Textual submission

Welcome to the Dark Jedi Brotherhood
Once it’s heard, you cannot forget our name
We have knowledge and power, crushing good
With loyal members bringing you to shame.
Grand Masters and leaders with iron fists
Two orders fight, Krath will learn the unknown
Uniting til you feel death’s vibrant kiss
Guarding, never threatening, our Iron Throne.
Sith, seeking power, will take to the stars
Krath, our dark mystics, scour for all lore
Obelisk pound the ground, giving you scars
A panel, lock, and knob, making our door.
For these reasons and more, we’re triumphant
For we have power in an abundance.

Placement
2nd place
Member
Legorii Arconae
File submission
Poetry_-_2013_IG_60.doc
Placement
4th place
Member
General Ood Bnar
Textual submission

Death, pain, bloodlust, hate...
Fear us! we hid, we waited.
Now we have returned!

Placement
5th place