Competition: An Odan to Urr

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An Odan to Urr

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Write a poem of any style except haiku. It needs to have a minimum of 5 stanzas consisting of 4 lines each. Rhyming is not necessary. Write a poem as a tribute to House Odan-Urr or to the members/member of the house. Your poems will be graded on creativity, flow, and emotional content. Keep it light and funny or dark and serious, top two poems will receive 4th level crescents. Subscribe to participate.

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Competition Information
Organized by
Occultan Iacul
Running time
2013-09-07 until 2013-09-15 (9 days)
Target Unit
Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
4 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Ryan Hawkins
Member
Ryan Hawkins
Textual submission

Where the rivers of Tython flow,
Made bitter by ashes of cities cast down,
Like potters' rejects now shattered and forgotten,
By a Stygian sea, where asphodels did grow,
And where heroes' deeds had been begotten,

Could I show you the Force in but a blade,
And in the lives it has unmade?

The Force is in life, not in killing,
But Odan-Urr, it's heroes stood,
Against the forces of darkness,
Seeking to dash them against the rocks,
Like a callous tide to a man adrift,
And though outnumbered, fought for Good.

Like an iron gate against Perdition,
Have the Jedi stood as sentinel,
Against temptation within and blade without,
They fought ignorance with erudition,
Fought absolutes with wisdom's doubt,
Fought tempestuousness with the signs of peace,
And fought desire, with sweet release,
And with no death, did worries cease,

Those fallen in our name,
Their lightsabers clasped in calmest claw,
Given strength by courage,
Their knuckles unwhitened by tension or rage,
Releasing their swords of sunlight only as they drew their final breath,
But there was only the Force, and never death,
And their lives live on in archive page,

Why?

Why is the Path of Light so heavy to lift,
While Darkness deceives you in its levity?
Perhaps it is our House's destiny,
It's fate woven in the weft of time,
To shoulder the burdens others may not,
So in the light, through goodness wrought,
We are the ones so truly free,
Whilst shackled by shame the slave to darkness,
Is borne down by passion to bended knee.

Placement
1st place
Member
Liam Torun-Urr
File submission
An_Ode_to_Light's_Defense.rtf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Krandon Lucian Firebringer
File submission
Contrasts_poem.docx
Placement
No placement
Member
Constantine
File submission
Poetry_Entry_Benedict_Williams_Pin_10484.docx
Textual submission

Uploaded file for your consideration
Benedict Williams Pin 10484

Placement
No placement