Competition: Prisoner rescue

Finished
Prisoner rescue

Specifics

We have received word of a freighter carrying live cargo - slaves or prisoner. We have reason to believe many of them are Harakoan, sold of by mercenaries on New Tython. We must intercept this vessel and free these prisoners.

Platform

Any text editor (MS Word, OpenOffice, etc.) Times New Roman, 11pt, 250 words minimum, no maximum.

Details

Write about the mission to save the prisoners from your characters perspective. It's a simple comp so you don't have to go overboard with detail. Best fiction wins.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
The Knights of Allusion: Missions (Season 2)
Organized by
Boss Morgan B. Sorenn
Running time
2013-11-29 until 2013-12-06 (8 days)
Target Unit
Battleteam Knights Of Allusis
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Downgraded Fifth Level Crescents
Participants
4 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
1st place
Sala Fe
Member
Sala Fe
File submission
kah.doc
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Rangel
Member
Rangel
Textual submission

Prisoners Rescue

It was a beautiful calm day, Rangel had been by the lake meditating and training with the force. After a days worth of training it was getting dark and he was ready for a shower. As soon he was heading to his home he had got word of a freighter carrying live cargo, slaves or prisoner. This had to be stop. Rangel to a had grabbed his equipment and took of to wear they were located. About 15 miles into the western forest of Sanulu he had found where they were located at. Looking around he saw many cages of prisoned Harakoans. Also a few other creatures. There was one freighter with 10 mercenaries surrounding the area. Going into stealth mode Rangel climbed a tree and got close to 2 mercenaries and knocked them out cold. Running across the camp he took out another two. One of thes mercenaries had a rope, Rangel had set up a trap so for who ever steps on the rope will get caught by it. Rangel was making strange creature noises catching on of the mercenary attention. As the man got closer to the bushes Rangel came down from the tree on top of him and knocked him out cold. Three others came out looking for the men for they were not answering the bosses dispatch. Rangel came out and tackled on down. Wrestling on the ground the other two started shooting at Rangel and the mercenary. Both stop moving, the mercenaries thought they shot both down. Rangel used the mercenary blaster and shot the mercenaries down. "Only two left" Rangel said to himself. The upper rite hand man came out. Tall dark man, real muscular. "So you must of took out my men Jedi. Well these are our slaves and if you think you can save them well you have to kill me first." The man said. So Rangel grabbed the blaster and started shooting at the man. Missing his shot the man came rite at him and hit him in the face. Rangel force pushes him into a tree. The man got up n pulled out a knife and came back at Rangel. Swing at Rangel, Rangel got cut on his chest. "So jedi bleed, hahaha its over for you." The man quickly threw a grenade at Rangel. Using the force Rangel shot it rite back. The man was running trying not to get caught in the blast. So as he ran he had gotten caught by the trap that was set up earlier by Rangel. The grenade landed next to the man. The man was no more as only his coupes hanging. Releasing all the Harakoans, he realized one mercenary was missing, he took a look inside the ship and no one was around. All of a sudden the ship started up and was going for take off. He ran to the cockpit and no one was around. The ship was put on auto pilot to Tattooine. "Hands up", heavy tone voice is what he heard. Puting his hands up Rangel walked closer to the pilot. The pilot handcuffed Rangel and put him in the cockpit. With desperate attempt to escape, Rangel headbuted his head. The pilot shot his blaster into the ship. Destroying all that was inside. The ship was coming to a fall. Rangel snapped his cuffs in two. He made a run opening the cargo doors and jumped out into water. Voming back uo from under. He could see the ship going into a crash to shore on fog section of Sanulu. A big explosion is what anyone could see. Coming back shore he seen the Harakoans had tied up whoever was still alive from the mercenaries. The Harakoans shook hands with Rangel and gave him a big thanks for saving them. As for the mercenaries, they were taken into custody as they waited trail for the sentence.

Rangel, 13387

Placement
2nd place