Competition: Question of loyalty

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Question of loyalty

It is said that the Grand Master has order creation of so called Inquisitors, who are his secret operatives. According to the spreading rumours, these operatives are loyal to the Grand Master himself and carry out his orders. It is believed that some members of Clan Odan-Urr have become the Inquisitors and one of them even a Grand Inquisitor, who is said to be completely loyal to the Grand Master himself. While the identity of these operatives remains shrouded in mystery, the rumours have already influenced the way of thinking of all members of the Dark Jedi Brotherhood.

Your task in this competition is to describe the reaction of your character to the rumours regarding the fact that some of the members of Clan Odan-Urr have become special operatives, who serve the Grand Master himself. Write a minimum 500 words long story revolving around the thoughts and actions of your character about this matter. It will be graded in accordance to the Voice grading rubric.

Competition Information
Organized by
Adept Xantros
Running time
2015-10-04 until 2015-10-18 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Odan-Urr
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
5 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
Member
Cartel Dh'than
File submission
Loyalty.docx
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Sa Ool
Member
Sa Ool
Textual submission

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qI-cMYI9glLwgvAjaPr5om0Xc7fxo7zbTRciNZXSVg/edit?usp=sharing

Placement
2nd place