Competition: Round 3: Fiction II

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Round 3: Fiction II

From "The Masque of the Red Death":

It was in this apartment, also, that there stood against the western wall, a gigantic clock of ebony. Its pendulum swing to and fro with a dull, heavy, monotonous clang; and when the minute-hand made the circuit of the face, and the hour was to be stricken, there came from the brazen lungs of the clock a sound which was clear and loud and deep and exceedingly musical, but of so peculiar a note and emphasis that, at each lapse of an hour, the musicians of the orchestra were constrained to pause, momentarily, in their performance, to hearken the sound; and thus the waltzers perforce ceased their evolutions; and there was a brief disconcert of the whole gay company; and, while the chimes of the clock yet rang, it was observed that the giddiest grew pale, and the more aged and sedate passed their hands over their brows as if in confused reverie or meditation. But when the echoes had fully ceased, a light laughter at once pervaded the assembly; the musicians looked at each other and smiled as if at their own nervousness and folly, and made whispering vows, each to the other, that the next chiming of the clock should produce in them no similar emotion; and then, after the lapse of sixty minutes (which embrace three thousand and six hundred seconds of the Time that flies), there came yet another chiming of the clock, and then were the same disconcert and tremulousness and meditation as before.

In as few or as many words as you need, write about this tale of Plagueis and Tarentum that inspires dread and hesitation of the same manner. Entries can be poetry or prose, and will be judged on flow, feel, creativity, and aim for suspense and unseen terror. Remember, this is about the feel of terror and dread, and not the sight of gore or otherwise. Try to channel Hitchcock or Poe, and make the hair on the backs of our necks stand up.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Plagueis-Tarentum: Forged Alliances (Cooperative Event)
Organized by
Teylas Ramar, Adept Farrin Xies Tarentae, Master Selika Roh di Plagia, Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Running time
2015-11-02 until 2015-11-09 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 6 have participated.
Results
Member
Scion Tarentae
File submission
Disturbed.docx
Placement
1st place
Member
Envoy Taranae Rhode
Textual submission

And in the centre of this chamber stood the obelisk, as silent and unmoving as a stone sentinel could be. Every week, on the sixth day, the stars and moon would shed their light through the portal above it and it would glow, with a radiance so bright that the assembled people had to shield their eyes from the sight. As the light struck, the sentinel awoke and dark energies were seen to swirl around its facets; dark clouds of menace with a sick, twisted feeling accompanying their arrival. And as this phenomenon manifested, all could do naught but stand and stare, their eyes drawn inexplicably to the stone guardian of the chamber as the energies heaved, swirled and pulsated around it. Two glowing amber orbs appeared on the obelisk’s surface, their presence plunging the temperature of the chamber so low that the breath of each person assembled would freeze as it left their terrified, heaving chests. Their mouths frozen in an ‘o’ of horror as those amber eyes scrutinized their to-ing and fro-ing. Phantasmal arms would appear as if conjured by some fantastic weaver of the magical arts, and they would wave in a gesture as the eyes faded and the mists and swirls of energy dissipated. The arms followed until the obelisk stood silent once more. The people awoke as if from a trance and glanced at one another, sheepishly. Their encounter was forgotten and they returned to their business as the stone sentinel once again slumbered until another six days had passed and the miracle would manifest itself once more.

Placement
2nd place
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
3rd place
4th place
Seer Eiko
Member
Seer Eiko
File submission
ForgedAlliance3_Fiction2_Eiko11286.pdf
Placement
4th place
Member
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
Submission
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
5th place
6th place
Constantine
Member
Constantine
Textual submission

Caesar Pin 10484 Entry

The death you could smell
The death you could taste
What have you gotten me into

Oh War Bloody War
And death
Leave Me Alone

Placement
6th place