Competition: Round 3: Fiction I

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Round 3: Fiction I

Long dead Sith Lords are always a problem, especially when they’ve been feeding on a focused nexus of dark side Force energy for the last few thousand years. Whoever the malevolent entity now inhabiting the depths of the Anchorage might have been in life, it has now gained the ability to appear as anyone who has “become one with the Force” in the past (in essence, anyone dead). It seems less interested in directly destroying those currently wandering around the station, instead focusing on trying to twist them to its will.

The subject of this fiction prompt is you character attempting to be corrupted by the influence of this entity. Will it appear to you as a long lost family member? The scores of innocents your character has left dead in their wake? Perhaps a long lost love? Whatever the case may be, the entity IS fully them, in both appearance and mannerism. Be it through sweet talk or torture, write your character’s interactions with this entity.

(If you need an example of what this entity is, try this: https://vimeo.com/60312789)

Grading on this fiction competition will be based on the Voice fiction rubric.

Competition Information
Parent Competition
Plagueis-Tarentum: Forged Alliances (Cooperative Event)
Organized by
Teylas Ramar, Master Selika Roh di Plagia, Adept Farrin Xies Tarentae, Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Running time
2015-11-02 until 2015-11-09 (8 days)
Target Unit
Entire DJB
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Second Level Crescents
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 5 have participated.
Results
Member
Envoy Taranae Rhode
Textual submission

Shades of Family

As she dashed through the now collapsing archway, Taranae dove forwards into the chamber beyond. The loud crash behind her and the clouds of billowing dust that surrounded her as she pushed herself up on her hands bore testament to the now blocked entry to the room. Pushing herself upright into a crouch, she surveyed the room as she patted her robes, creating clouds of dust that made her cough harshly. Her black robes now looked grey with black patches where she had tried to brush off the coat of debris that now covered it entirely. Her hood had fallen back in the forward roll she had made and now her fiery red hair hung loosely about her face. Checking her waist, she found her lightsaber and blasters still in place and her spirits perked slightly. Whatever she had to face ahead, she was prepared.

“Tara?” said a voice from the far side of the room.
“Who is it? What do you want?” she replied, unsheathing her DL-44 from her hip holster and aiming it in the voices’ general direction. She could make out a vague shape drifting towards her from the far side of the chamber and she dropped into a firing pose.
“If you don’t stop or tell me who you are, I *will* fire!” she said vehemently.
“Don’t you recognize your sister when she speaks to you Taranae? After all these years you’ve forgotten me?”
The voice sounded hurt and pained and Taranae squinted into the room, trying to make out the figure in the swirling, but now settling dust.
“Vanessa? Is that you? How can that be?” the sith asked quizzically. “You left the Brotherhood and returned home, what are you doing here on the Anchorage?”
“I was brought here against my will by the Tarentum leaders.” she replied. “I was trapped in here by them in the hopes that you would come to rescue me.”
“But why would I need to rescue you?” asked Taranae. “What would they gain in trapping you here for me to find?”
“They hoped to blame Plagueis for my capture and turn you against them.” she replied. “They wanted to make you believe that your Clan betrayed you so you would defect to Tarentum to help them take over the Anchorage.”
“What?” she screamed in return. “My Clan would never betray me!”
“So you discard the warnings of your sister so easily, do you?” Vanessa replied in a sad voice. “I thought I knew you, sis. Obviously I don’t. You’ve changed so much, become so deluded by your dreams of power that you can’t even see problems and betrayal even if they are put in front of your face.”
“Wait. You’re not Vanessa!” said Taranae with a growl, a scowl replacing her look of shock. “Vanessa would never speak that way of me, I know her too well. Who are you, imposter? Speak now or I will kill you where you stand!”
“If you don’t believe me,” she replied, “believe your mother, Tara.”
“My Mother? What are you talking about?” she snapped back at Vanessa.
“Follow me, sis. Tarentum captured her too.” With that, Vanessa turned on her heel and vanished into the swirling dust.

“Wait! Vanessa!” she cried after her. “ Where are you going?”
“Follow…” came the reply from across the room. Taranae pushed to her feet from her firing stance and brushed the dust from her knees. Keeping her weapon drawn, she hesitantly followed the figure. For some reason she had conflicting thoughts of who or what this thing in the form of her sister actually was. As she progressed onwards, she cast nervous glances all around, expecting an attack at any time from within the still settling dust. As the clouds cleared she began to see more easily and almost jumped as a figure stepped out from behind a pillar.

Raising her blaster, she demanded, “Who are you?”
“Don’t you dare speak to your mother like that Taranae!” the figure replied. The sith shrunk back.
“Mother? Why are you here?” She realized that the figure had used the same tone that her actual mother did when she was in trouble or had done something wrong. That was the only time when her mother would use her full first name.
“Your sister must have told you,” she replied, “that we were brought here to convince you that Plagueis had betrayed you.”
“She did, but I don’t understand. Why would they do this?”
“So you would join them and help bring about the downfall of your Clan, dear.” she replied.
Taranae stood stock still, a little unnoticeable twitch of her mouth was the only sign that she thought something amiss.
“It’s been so long, mother.” she sobbed. “I ‘ve missed you.”
“I know, child.” she replied. “Come here.”
Taranae slowly crossed to her, wiping tears from her eyes. “Where’s Vanessa, mother?” she asked. “She was here a moment ago.”
“Her mother seemed to stiffen for a split second but regained her composure as she replied, “I sent her into the other room to retrieve our belongings. At least they let us keep some things.”
As Taranae crossed to her mother, she fumbled with her belt out of her mother’s view. She stretched out her arms, expecting the same from her mother.
She walked into an embrace that seemed odd yet familiar and hugged as hard as she could. She laid her head on her mother’s shoulder and quietly sobbed, “I’m sorry mother.”
“For what, dear?” came the reply.
“Having to do this.” she replied as she moved sharply away, reaching around, both igniting and thrusting her lightsaber through her mother’s torso in one swift movement.

Her mother’s face froze into a look of abject horror, and Taranae wondered if her guess had been wrong. Her fears subsided almost immediately as a shriek erupted from the being in front of her, the mouth opening wider than it should have been able to and the body dissipated into mist, disappearing towards the roof.
“My mother would *never* use that term on me.” she said to the mist. “*Dear* was reserved for Vanessa!” she sneered as the mist vanished. As the air cleared, she thumbed her lightsaber off and picked up the blaster she had dropped in favour of the gamble she had played. It had worked, but she did not know what or who she had just vanquished. But was it vanquished or just sent elsewhere? She shuddered and holstered her weapons once more. Now this debacle was over, she had to find that other exit quickly.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Seer Eiko
Member
Seer Eiko
File submission
ForgedAlliance3_Fiction1_Eiko11286.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr
Submission
Warlord Brimstone aka Seabr'imsto'nedansr opted out of publishing his submission.
Placement
3rd place
Member
Dr. Giyana Jurro
Submission
Dr. Giyana Jurro opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
4th place
5th place
Constantine
Member
Constantine
Textual submission

Caesar Pin 10484

What are you doing I dont understand you are trying to kill me why
What I have i done to you your anger is so strong and is such a part of me
You Understand dont you,are you sure you are listening to me.

My heart is beating so fast i cant stop it, stop you are driving my crazy
Oh my god I am going, nuts what are you doing here again i dont understand
are you my brother or are you me trying to get out and run over the world
I still dont understand what are you trying to do.

My i can now feel my heart beating faster are you trying to give me a heart attack
you are suppose to be me my heart and soul trying to get out and help me be right not wrong
right not wrong where is the door i want to get out i cant see the door why are you blocking me
Oh God you are the devil are'nt you trying to kill me.

Placement
5th place