Competition: [Nighthawk][February] Open Fiction

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[Nighthawk][February] Open Fiction

You have your choice for what story to write - details are completely up to the writer to determine. However, your story must at least make use of your main character within the Dark Jedi Brotherhood and involve their Battleteam in some fashion. There are no word limits, and entries are judged in line with the Voice Fiction Rubric.

Each story will be based on its individual merits rather than by response to a prompt as they normally would be.

In addition to the chance to place in this month's competition, the winning entry will be featured in a future report!

Note that you must be a member of the listed Battleteam in order to place, though submissions from outside the Battleteam will still be read and enjoyed.

Competition Information
Organized by
Eminent Ikarri Itinen
Running time
2016-02-04 until 2016-03-05 (about 1 month)
Target Unit
Battleteam Nighthawk
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fifth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
5 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
1st place
Arcia Cortel
Member
Arcia Cortel
File submission
NH_Open_Prompt_-_Returning_Home.pdf
Placement
1st place
Member
Ghost Rulvak Qurroc
Textual submission

Rulvak sat in his quarters with a datapad in his hand, pondering if he had done the right thing. It was his first time having to punish anyone for anything. Insubordination is a serious offense aboard any vessel, as the crew has to have respect for the operation to work as a whole. Rulvak knew this in his mind, as he continued to dwell over what had happened.

**30 Minutes Prior**

“This is not a game Egregious. You do not get to just sit in your bunk all day. We still have a ship to take care of, and if I order you to do something, then it needs to get done!”

“Sir, I’m not sure this really pertains to the matter at hand,” the Falleen replied almost in a whisper.

“This definitely pertains to the situation. An order is an order. If you decide not to follow this one, how can I count on you to follow other ones? It doesn’t matter if I am asking you to go get me a snack, or if I am asking you to escort VIP’s. The overall concept is the same, follow the damn order. I shouldn’t have to repeat that again!” The Sephi was clearly upset.

“Captain Qurroc, Admiral Arcia on the long-range comms,” called out the nearest communications officer.

“Transfer it to my quarters,” the Captain replied quickly before turning back to Egregious. “As for you, the next week will be janitorial duties. I expect this ship to be spotless at the end of it. I hope you haven’t made any of the other crew members angry enough to make your job harder.” Rulvak then nodded to the Commander, who quickly called the bridge to attention at the sign of the Captain leaving.

“Carry on!” Rulvak shouted over his shoulder as if left the bridge.

Once he got back to his quarters, he thought he may have been a bit harsh. He did ask Egregious for a snack afterall. *No, the pinciple remains. He must follows orders just the same as everyone else.*

“Ah, Arcia, how are things?”

“Captain Qurroc, things are well. In fact, I will be coming to visit very soon…” Arcia started as their conversation transitioned to her new position aboard the Nighthawk.

Placement
2nd place