Competition: Aspect of Greatness

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Aspect of Greatness

We all have things about us that make us stand out, sometimes it's how we approach combat, our personality or even just something in general about us that makes us unique. Write a custom Aspect using the information on the Aspects wiki page to help you. Secondly you will write a fiction of maximum 500 words incorporating this aspect into it. Grading will be based on how well the aspect fits into the story along with the quality and individuality of the aspect itself

Competition Information
Organized by
Dr. Giyana Jurro, Warlord Tracinya Beviin Entar
Running time
2016-02-06 until 2016-02-27 (22 days)
Target Unit
Clan Plagueis
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
8 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Malice
Member
Malice
Textual submission

Aspect name: You are all of you beneath me!

Description: After finding out their child was force sensitive, Malice's parents dumped her on Cholganna, leaving her to fend for herself because they grew afraid of her abilities. Due to this betrayal, Malice bitterly views all non-force users as weak and pathetic, and definitely not worth her time.

Fiction (Word count: 499)

Malice had been just finishing up a training session, when a nearby guard approached her. He stood fidgeting, and she wondered why he was so nervous.

"Lady Malice, there are two people desiring to see you. They say it's urgent."

His announcement peaked her curiosity, and she threw her bag over her shoulder.

"Very well, where are they?"

"They're...well they insisted to wait for you in front of your quarters."

Ah. That's why he was so nervous. Malice didn't like just anyone knowing where she lived, but she was only midly annoyed. The guard hadn't needed to be so on edge.

"You're dismissed." She told him, and he let out a sigh of relief and scurried out.

Who in the world could wish to see her? Usually meetings were set up weeks in advance. What could be so important they'd just turn up out of the blue?

Pulling her shoes back on, she walked out of the training room, turning left and heading to meet whoever it was waiting for her.

Turning the corner to her hallway, she saw the two people talking nervously with each other. Why was everyone so nervous today? Malice strode up to them, coughing to announce her pressence. When the two turned to look at her, she froze. It couldn't be. Not here.

"Kaila, we've been waiting for you!" The man said, smiling warmly. She punched him square in the face.

"What are you doing here?" She hissed, now seething. The punch had thrown the man back a few steps, and the woman with him went to examine his face.

"You shouldn't punch your father." She said, looking at Malice with a look of disappointment.

"AND YOU SHOULDN'T ABANDON YOUR CHILD ON A WILD PLANET." She yelled back, ready to take care of them right there. But killing them wouldn't tell her why they were there. She took a deep breath, glaring at them.

"What do you want? Give me a good reason to let you live." She demanded, folding her arms. Her amber eyes bore into them, and she could tell they were shaken.

"We came to ask for your help," The woman started, "Our village is being attacked, and if something doesn't happen soon, I'm afraid we'll all be killed." She was close to tears, and the man looked solemn. Malice only smirked.

"Let me make this very clear. So clear, I never have to see you again. I don't give a damn about your precious village, and frankly, I'd love if they took care of you for me. One less thing for me to do. And I would never risk my life for pathetic, fearful people like you. Another force sensitive is the one who saved me, so my loyalty will be to them. Not the talentless scum standing before me. You have two minutes to be out of my sight, or you won't have to worry about your lives anymore."

The two turned, running for their lives. Good riddance.

Placement
1st place
Member
Callus Bo'amar
File submission
AspectofGreatness4195VaniaDrellik.pdf
Placement
2nd place
Member
A deleted dossier
Textual submission

Custom Aspect (located on Character Sheet as Wiki Bio is forth-coming):

A Job A Day Keeps The Doctor Away: Laren Uscot is driven by taking tasks, overcoming its obstacles and succeeding. Though money is necessary to perform any job he may be given, he is neither driven by revenge or bloodlust. His pragmatic approach to work is a means of occupying his thoughts away from painful memories of his torture and time as a slave. However, sometimes he takes on too many jobs at once, leaving him struggling to find a way to maintain his reputation, and his head.

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Cartao
Roaki's Blade Cantina

33 ABY

Though Cartao still felt some of the pull of the New Republic, even in the Expansion Regions, places that attracted vile scum and malicious individuals always existed for the potential to commit crime for profit. Roaki's Cantina, located in the capital of Cartao's lower levels was dark, the lighting subdued for the benefit of its customers, masking faces, weapons, and motive. The establishment, if it could be called that, was a large cylindrical room, with a bar occupying the entire wall to the left upon entering the main door. The rest of the cantina was a combination of linen-lined booths complete with corroding metal walls and tables, and a set of ten stand-alone plasteel tables with a total of forty chairs surrounding a small dance floor. Soft yet psychedelic music was produced from the bar, as the owner was too cheap to want to buy a stage and have live music. There was a holo for that, customers would joke.

Laren Uscot sat at a booth close to the bar, at its left-most side, the side of which the front door was located. His booth was empty save for him, and its location gave him perfect coverage of the entire establishment. He could see the bartender manning his post, a fat Toydarian named Lif with an apron caked with what Laren only wanted to think was dirt, though he was surely wrong. Only two people sat at the bar listening to Lif's haggard voice drone on about various happenings on the planet. The first was a human, or perhaps a near-human male, dressed in the garb of a dangerous criminal, blaster holstered at his waist. He fingered it without noticing as he was forced to continue listening to Lif, seemingly comforted by the drink he held in his other hand. The second was an Iktotchi male, the lower half of whose face was covered by a scarf, showing only dark eyes that were staring at something beyond the bottles lined without regard for organization or type on the bar's far wall.

Other patrons occupied tables, and Laren could spot a group of Duros speaking in hushed tones off in the distance, two Twi'lek females who were too relaxed, a dangerous trait in a cantina that had forced Laren to sit where he was now. Anyone with the confidence to seemingly enjoy their time in the cantina was either a fool, or extremely dangerous. Judging by their knives, Laren took a safe guess to mind his distance. He was in no mood to start trouble or have it find him. He had just completed three jobs for three clients, and he had arranged for them to arrive within thirty minutes of each other since he was owed payment. He had taken out three targets in the Inner Rim, the convenience of which was granted by his reputation providing him the ability to pick and choose his jobs. He had taken out a rival bounty hunter, Yeaazin Poal, a Trandoshan who had taken contracts with a rival faction of his client. He had been quite the challenge, and Laren had been more than satisfied to take a blade to his throat after a fierce duel. He had also been contracted to kill a juniour New Republic diplomat who had information regarding a complex embezzlement scheme on Mimban connected to the Hutt family, and a retired Bothan spy who had formerly worked for the Rebellion. Though the second job was a filler for credits to keep his own enterprise afoot, the final operation was one of his best. He had somehow managed, with heavy assistance from the technology of the day, to sneak up on this Bothan in broad daylight and stab him in the back. The satisfaction he had had walking away with the Bothan's prized medallion as proof of success for his client was immeasurable to but a few moments in his life.

Laren's eyes caught the soft light from the front door, signaling its opening from the dimly lit street outside. Sure enough his first client was walking through the door, a wealthy looking human female flanked by two guards, humanoid by their form but covered from head to toe in black robes and armed with a sword each and blasters. She had no trouble spotting the Pantoran in the sparse crowd, and she sat opposite Laren at his booth as her guards took flanking positions, looking outward on the crowd. This was the client who had contracted the Trandoshan mission.

"Mister Uscot, news is spreading in the underworld that Yeaazin Poal was murdered during a drunk brawl." She paused, her fingers drumming on the table rhythmically. She seemed hesitant, almost. Nervous? Not likely. "He was bested by an unknown assailant, and his throat was cut. Excellent work."

"Lady Kora, only the best is reserved for you," Laren said, a deliberately excessive bow of his head as a sign of respect. He wanted more jobs from someone well placed in the spice trade, as going up against his rivals was proving quite the challenge.

"Your relatively unknown reputation among other bounty hunters gave you a unique edge I am glad you used to its fullest advantage. Your credits have been transferred to your account, and if we have something else for you, I will contact you personally."

Suddenly the door opened again. If it wasn't for the man who had stepped through the door next, Laren would not have cared. Instead, he recognized the individual not only by his distinct helmet, but also by his armour. It was his second client, sentient Laren only knew as Corsair. And judging Lady Kora's guards' reaction, Laren wasn't the only one to make his acquaintance.

"Corsair! Karabast, I have been set up." She almost threw herself with the speed of which she got up from her seat, drawing a blaster from under he clothing and readying the weapon for battle. "LAREN! Did you do this?"

"Lady Kora," Corsair's voice rasped from under his mask, his true tone masked by a voice emulator. "A pleasure, as always. And Laren?" He laughed, the voice emulator providing a uniquely horrific tone that sent shivers down Laren's spine. "Laren, you just find yourself in quite the - situation. Swindling enemies for maximum profit." His blaster was drawn, though he made no move to attack.

The room was tense, and Laren had no opportunity to move. He sat dumb-founded behind his table, his hands reaching for his DL-44 he had holstered to his left thigh, quickly released it from its bonds.

"Now this has all been a misunderstanding. I took contracts from the both of you, and I came through! I had no idea, absolutely zero idea that you two were competitors -"

"Enemies of the highest caliber is a more accurate term," Corsair rasped, having reached the far side of the dance floor, a tactically superior position in the case of a firefight against a superior number of opponents.

Finally the door to the Roaki's Blade opened a third time, and Laren's luck seemed as if it had completely turned around and run away this day. His third client walked in the door, weapons already drawn as he had probably guessed something was amiss when patrons slowly began filing out of the Cantina. Orik Joyurn, a Zabrak slaver and bounty hunter who was a contact for the Hutts had made his appearance. He was smart enough to know that when scum of the sort that laid their credits down here only left when the heat was akin to an out of control inferno, and thus it was best to escape with their skin while they had a chance.

"I come here to meet with the Pantoran who exceeded my expectations, and I find two low-rate thugs pointing their weapons at each other. I knew you were a damn fine bounty hunter, Uscot, but this sort of villainy is simply beyond what I had imagined," Orik's voice boomed as he waited by the door. "Seems like you won't be getting paid after all."

Laren had to do something, he had to act. This was a powder-keg that was going to explode with or without him, though come to think of it he was the root cause of the incoming explosion of gunfire.

"I really don't want to keep repeating myself, but I took contracts from all three of you. I came through on my work, and I had asked to meet with you at three very separate times within a short period so I could get off world and go about my business." Though he couldn't see the faces of two of his adversaries, he knew the look given to him in his direction was blank and unforgiving.

Suddenly one of Lady Kora's guards charged Corsair, though the guard was quickly cut down by a blaster shot to the chest. Blaster bolts erupted everywhere, from both his former clients and those who remained who wanted in on a piece of the action. Laren barely noticed Lif scurrying for his own blaster rifle behind the bar as he bounded from his table, rolling over and landing adeptly on the ground before he set his feet and ran for the door. He kept his head low and his cloak up, hoping his unassuming clothes would aid in his escape. He saw the backdoor to the right of the bar, only a few meters away from where he was now. Before he could reach the door, he was stopped in his tracks by a dead Duros knocked over the table, a small knife embedded in his skull and a look of surprise etched upon his eternally still face. Laren shook his head, taking a second to re-assert himself, and then he continued his escape, passing through the door into the alley and running like hell as fast as he could from the scene of his stupidity.

"Great, Laren. You find yourself three good jobs and three new murderers, if they all survive." Even as he ran he couldn't think these words, as his mind was focused on escape and evasion. He was muttering them through quick and hoarse breaths as he sprinted through the lower levels of Cartao, knowing his only escape was off the planet unless he wished to die within the next hour.

"Time to find a ship."

Placement
3rd place
Member
Alishu
Textual submission

#9947, Alishu

*"The dark side will devour those who lack the power to control it. It's a fierce storm of emotion that annihilates anything in its path. It lays waste to the weak and unworthy." ― Darth Bane*

### Lost In The Darkness [Personality]
The character's time on the Dark Path has scarred their mind, making them prone to easily triggered fits of negativity. When these seemingly irrational fits are at their most severe, the character cannot help but appear and act distressed, overwhelmed by emotions such as anger, depression, and fear. This madness fills the character's daily life with confusion and constant mental agony, but serves to deeply strengthen their ties to the dark side.

*"I am a disturbance in the Force." ― Darth Vader*

####**New Tython, In the veldt of Tanduran**

"Please come back," started the impassioned plea. "You're like a daughter to me; I love you." The Jedi Knight was so tired that she could only barely pant out what she wanted to say, her lightsaber lowered after fighting her fallen Padawan to a standstill. Ever since the girl went missing, the Master searched tirelessly for her Student, not understanding that her disappearance was linked to a slide into the dark side that she hadn't at all sensed. The two had been close once, spending every evening together, brushing and braiding each other's hair, talking and giggling well into the night; an odd but beautiful relationship for a Master and Student. But now the careful, loving motions of a braid were replaced by the whirlwind defense and patient offense of Form III, as the two, nigh-invincible Jedi fought a sad battle of stamina and endurance, until the sun set and the sky resembled that of many shared evenings.

The symbolism of these things was not lost on the Padawan, visibly pained by her Master's words. She felt so lost, so broken, so confused; nothing made sense to her, and it felt as if her mind had fallen into a inescapable fog, lost in the darkness. Tears had always come easily for the young girl, and even now they streamed down her face, glinting in the green hue of her armory saber. "I want nothing more than for things to be like they were," sobbed the Padawan. But scarcely could this thought leave her lips before the cruel wheels of the dark side began to turn, telling her that, 'if her Master really loved her', the Jedi Knight would drop her saber and come running to embrace her. Eagerly she awaited her Master's reply, but remaining in place, the Jedi Knight instead spoke six, stupidly simple words, "They can. It's up to you." Instantly the Padawan's features contorted into deep-seated rage. It was clear that her Master no longer cared about her, and that she had perhaps only come because the Consul or Dark Council ordered her too.

The darkness had won. Abandoning all sense of Form, the Padawan bound forward, her saber clashing spectacularly with her Master's in a bright flash of light.

*"I'm being torn apart. I want to be free of this pain." ― Kylo Ren*

Placement
No placement
Member
Kryy Vitaan
Textual submission

Ever since they’d known each other, they’d led busy lives, often fighting alongside each other but it just wasn't the same. They rarely had time to themselves, time to take out and live for themselves. The Jedi did not believe in attachment, things such as love and marriage. The Sith moreover found compassion and love a weakness, making you vulnerable and petty. Being a Dark Jedi, Kryy had been accustomed to both ideologies, though neither seemed to stick. This was the way of a Dark Jedi who walked the grey path. For Kryy, finding love was not something he had set out on, but his happening of fate, meeting Misourae for the first time during a strike team mission on Coruscant, he’d felt a strong force bond between the two, an inseparable connection that had brought the two of them together. It had only been 4 months since they had been officially married to one another. A special ceremony was held on Alderaan, free from the fighting, the Sith and the Jedi alike. House Thul was kind enough to let the Dark Jedi and Dark Lord into their house and hold a ceremony in their honor. Time had flown by and through it all, they had managed to make it last, and Kryy couldn't think of anything he wanted more. However, such a gifted bond was not without its own consequences. On the planet Alderaan, Kryy lost his entire strike team when he chose to abandon his squad and rush to the aid of an ambushed Misourae. The bond the two shared came at a fatal and disastrous cost. It had left Kryy blind to many crucial details in the past and to the present moment, the Dark Disciples would bring havoc upon the galaxy, at the price of those most expendable.

Placement
No placement