Competition: [Tarentum] Two Sentence Horror Story: Castle Tarentum

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[Tarentum] Two Sentence Horror Story: Castle Tarentum

Inspired by this blog post about Two Sentence Horror Stories I've decided to turn this idea into a competition.

The gist is simple: write a two sentence (minimum and maximum) horror story about the horrors that take place in Castle Tarentum.

Remember to write in two sentences, no more, no less. Grading will be done using this formula: 50% Story, 25% Spelling/Grammar and 25% Entertainment with an emphasis on scariness.

Competition Information
Organized by
Reaver Frosty Romanae Tarentae
Running time
2016-07-29 until 2016-08-12 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Tarentum
Competition Type
Fiction
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
11 subscribers, of which 11 have participated.
Results
Member
Knight Alexander Drago
Textual submission

ooops my bad wrong one:

the last thing the Acolyte saw was Von Oberst gliding into his room and was cut open for the latest experiment, the mans other arm wearing a watch depicting 6:32 am.
the Acolyte woke with a startle and cold sweat, it was just a dream he thought until he gazed at the bedside alarm clock...it was only 6:31 as the door slide open.

Placement
1st place
Member
Professional Tebbo Jensen
Textual submission

As the food dwindled, people began to get desperate. That's when the dead bodies started to disappear.

Placement
2nd place
Member
Warlord Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission

Surrounded by inky blackness, an eternal darkness that penetrates your very soul, and there is nowhere to run, nowhere to hide, with only your heart beat reminding you that your alive. Deep beneath the surface, trapped within a castle dark, with groans of metal and the eerie sounds of unknown creatures just waiting for you outside, not knowing if just around the corner is your salvation or your doom.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Warlord Pel Tarentae
Textual submission

The presence of many powerful Tarenti, both past and present, inhabit the Castle. Oberst does as well!

Placement
4th place
4th place
Warrior Magik
Member
Warrior Magik
Textual submission

Beneath the depths of the ocean lies Castle Tarentum, the darkest kept secret on Yiridia II. The castle bleeds from the dark arts of Necromancy, only the Sith call home.

Placement
4th place
Member
Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Textual submission

Beneath the oceans of Yridia II lays the former home of the Clan of Death, now containing the darkness of mighty House Mortis. While other strongholds of Tarentum may be guarded by dark creatures and death itself, the fearsome guardians of the submerged fortress are the very beasts of the sea -- sharks, whales, giant squids and other, more fearsome dwellers of the unfathomable depths of the briny deep.

Placement
4th place
Member
Battlelord Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission

Sharks and seamonsters anounce the horrors. Within the walls of Castle Tarentum, many lay petrified while others begin ripping, tearing the roof off of the coffins.

Placement
4th place
Member
Adept Maxamillian von Oberst
Textual submission

Brb. Have a .gif for you guys.

Placement
4th place
Member
Mystic Kromtal Bloodfyre Romanae
Textual submission

The acolyte stumbled blindly down the unfamiliar halls of Castle Tarentum, "Where am I?", he thought. Before him stood a door, the placard next to it read: Oberst's Quarters...

Placement
4th place
4th place
Warlord Hades
Member
Warlord Hades
Textual submission

Oberst is known for two things: military tactics and painful, horrible experiments. He looks to you, because he's all done with tactics.

Placement
4th place
Member
Vanguard Kah Manet
Textual submission

The blood stained bone played peek a boo as the Tarenti worked the tearing flesh to and fro, mockingly howling as his prey screamed. The warmth of blood mingled on his fingers, reminding him of home.

Placement
4th place