Competition: [Tarentum] Haiku this: Waves of Yridia

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[Tarentum] Haiku this: Waves of Yridia

A haiku in English is a very short poem in the English language, following to a greater or lesser extent the form and style of the Japanese haiku. A typical haiku is a three-line observation about a fleeting moment involving nature. Write your own haiku on the moment your character first observed the rough seas of Yridia II. Here you can find some good examples.

Grading will be based 50% on respecting the haiku form and 50% on creativity. Have fun!

Competition Information
Organized by
Frosty Romanae Tarentae
Running time
2016-08-31 until 2016-09-14 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Tarentum
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents
Participants
4 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.
Results
1st place
Sala Fe
Member
Sala Fe
Textual submission

Ocean blues kiss the eyes
Thunder cracks, piercing the skies
On this place, our home

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Kidouses
Member
Kidouses
Textual submission

The cold ocean waves
Uncaring and instinctive
I wave in return

Placement
2nd place
Member
Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Textual submission

A guardian came.
Yridia thrashed about.
The tides gave consent.

Placement
3rd place
Member
Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission

On the throneword of
Clan Tarentum, I hear
wind and waves dancing.

The sound of water
calms my spirit and soul,
concealing Darkness.

Placement
4th place