Competition: [Tarentum] Two Sentence Horror Story: The Dark Side of The Force

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[Tarentum] Two Sentence Horror Story: The Dark Side of The Force

Inspired by this blog post about Two Sentence Horror Stories I've decided to turn this idea into a competition.

The gist is simple: write a two sentence (minimum and maximum) horror story about the horrors of the Dark Side of The Force.

Remember to write in two sentences, no more, no less. Grading will be done using this formula: 50% Story, 25% Spelling/Grammar and 25% Entertainment with an emphasis on scariness.

Competition Information

Organized by: Frosty Romanae Tarentae
Running time: 2016-08-31 until 2016-09-14 (15 days)
Target Unit: Clan Tarentum
Competition Type: Fiction
Awards: Fourth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants: 5 subscribers, of which 4 have participated.

Results

1st place

Zel Koo

Member: Zel Koo
Textual submission: My insides hurts, they feel like fire. The rage that drives me thirsts for desire, craves for an eternity of darkness that will yield nothing but chaos and anarchy in its wake; a galaxy of corpses driven wild by the darkness in us all.
Placement: 1st place

2nd place

Ranarr Kul-Tarentae

Member: Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission: You've felt the anger, fear and hatred while going above and beyond your inner Force. You've turned to the Dark Side!
Placement: 2nd place

3rd place

Master Zsarion Bloodfyre

Member: Master Zsarion Bloodfyre
Textual submission: Everyone has heard that the Dark Side of the Force leads to power, and to abilities that many might consider to be unnatural or unholy. Until you seek out those power, however, you will never know the depravity or nightmares you will be forced to take on to acquire those powers.
Placement: 3rd place

4th place

Magik

Member: Magik
Textual submission: The Dark Side can kill you in your sleep. The power will rip you apart.
Placement: 4th place