Competition: AVD: Love Poem

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AVD: Love Poem

Write a love poem from your character to another; you don’t have to be specific as to whom the recipient is. Use any style you like, at least two stanzas.

Grading will be done on originality, flow, and readability, and emotional reaction will also have an effect on the grading (amusement of feels).

Competition Information
Organized by
General Stres'tron'garmis, Creshkin Vos
Running time
2017-02-08 until 2017-02-22 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Arcona
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Third Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
9 subscribers, of which 8 have participated.
Results
Member
Proconsul Diyrian "Diy" Grivna
Textual submission

Well,
I am going to warn you,
Fuzznut,
I don't know what I'm doing.

Atty
Suggested this was a thing
People
Do around this time?

Love,
That is what I feel for
You.
You are always on my mind.

I
Could go and describe the
Fuzzy
Feelings that take resident in my stomach.

Instead,
I might humor you with a
Detailed
Description of your assets.

But
I shall do neither
For
I gift you something else.

Look
Inside this card here.
Take
Care, it's only for you. <3

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Kelviin
Member
Kelviin
Textual submission

YOUR FUR IS SO SMOOTH
YOUR BODY SO THIN
WE BOTH FELL IN LOVE
WHEN YOU FIRST SEE KELVIIN

ME SEE YOU AT WORK
BUT ME ALWAYS FEEL SHY
DON’T KNOW WHAT TO SAY
WHEN YOU HELD BY THAT GUY

BUT I NEED SAY SOMETHING
NOW WE IN A SAME ROOM
ARE YOU LOVE OF MY LIFE
OR ARE YOU JUST A BROOM

Placement
2nd place
Member
Aedile Tali Sroka
File submission
Love_Poem_.pdf
Textual submission

Such awkward, Very sappy, No Rhyming skillz.

Took a whole 7 minutes! (I timed)

Also, Hi Koliss! ^^" *lekblush*

Placement
3rd place
Member
Xenna Azara
Submission
Xenna Azara opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Maenaki Delavi'in
Textual submission

Roses are red
VIOLETS ARE PURPLE
Your face is like stone
And your words are hurtful
(I hope you track glitter into a meeting, ya karkin gutter schutta)
D.I.A.F.
K'tana

Aptitude does not cover
the visceral silhouette your eyes devour
Your every breath marks you a sinner
Just don't forget you owe me dinner.
Maenaki Dalevi'in

Placement
No placement
Member
Qyreia Arronen
Textual submission

Too many days I sat at home
staring out into the stars
So many nights I spent alone
wondering who you are
Between the lovers come and gone
my heart's borne many scars
This path I tread has not been long
and yet I've gone so far

Bend my heart to your will and make _one_ of you and I
Fight with me and lay me down until the day I die

To fall so far and sink so low
you raised me to my feet
Let me feel your soft touch slow
and let our passions meet
Everyday this love-pain grows
with every cruel heartbeat
You've earned this love and dearly so
my lovely Quaestor sweet

Bend my heart to your will and make _one_ of you and I
Fight with me and lay me down until the day I die

Placement
No placement
Member
Master Ruka Tenbriss Ya-ir
File submission
lovepoem.pdf
Placement
No placement
Member
Eminent Ikarri Itinen
Textual submission

I hate everyone else
No really I do
I hate you less so thanks

Placement
No placement