Competition: How-To Haiku: The Force

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How-To Haiku: The Force

"Well, the Force is what gives a Jedi his power. It's an energy field created by all living things. It surrounds us and penetrates us; it binds the galaxy together." - Obi Wan Kenobi, teaching Luke Skywalker about the Force.

Imagine what it would be like to teach another how to touch the Force. In the case of the Jedi, Sith, and other traditions, knowledge of the Force has been passed down for thousands of years - mostly through teachers. Certain individuals are born with a strong connection to the Force. What they require to tap into that connection is somebody who can show them how.

Compose a haiku describing what it is like to help another develop their ability to feel the Force. Is it joyful? Harrowing? Frustrating? Solemn? Try to put yourself in the shoes of a teacher, and through a standard haiku format, tell your story.

Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar. Submissions should be in some kind of word processor format (no links, files must be submitted or typed in the text box), and written in the style of a haiku.

Low participation will result in extension of the entry deadline.

Competition Information
Organized by
Minister Cor-Hatha Vow
Running time
2017-02-27 until 2017-03-13 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Tarentum
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 5 have participated.
Results
1st place
Sala Fe
Member
Sala Fe
Textual submission

A strange feeling waits
Like a long lost friend returned
The Force surrounds you

Placement
1st place
Member
Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission

I know you feel it.
Darkness, let it take over...
Let The Force guide you!

I see it in you.
Do not fight it anymore...
The Force runs through you!

Placement
2nd place
3rd place
Zyron Kael
Member
Zyron Kael
Textual submission

The force feels so good,
In places you knew it would,
Huh, it's kinda lewd!

Placement
3rd place
Member
Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission

Harder with youth,
The ways to understand,
The Force within.

Placement
4th place
Member
Kromtal Bloodfyre Romanae
Textual submission

Oh, what is the Force?
It's not midichlorians,
What a dumb idea.

Placement
5th place