Competition: How-To Haiku: Lightsabers

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How-To Haiku: Lightsabers

"This is the weapon of a Jedi Knight. Not as clumsy or as random as a blaster, but a more elegant weapon for a more civilized age." - Obi Wan Kenobi, teaching Luke Skywalker about lightsabers.

The iconic symbol of the Jedi and the Sith, lightsabers are regal but dangerous - especially for those who have never wielded them. For this haiku, imagine what it is like to teach the art of lightsaber combat. Picture it in the hands of a complete beginner, guided by you - their teacher.

Entries will be graded according to this rubric: 50% creativity, 25% poetic structure, 25% spelling and grammar. Submissions should be in some kind of word processor format (no links, files must be submitted or typed in the text box), and written in the style of a haiku.

Low participation will result in extension of entry deadline.

Competition Information
Organized by
Mystic Cor-Hatha Vow
Running time
2017-03-13 until 2017-03-27 (15 days)
Target Unit
Clan Tarentum
Competition Type
Poetry
Awards
Fourth Level Crescents and Clusters of Ice as per VOICE guidelines
Participants
6 subscribers, of which 6 have participated.
Results
Member
Ranarr Kul-Tarentae
Textual submission

Just keep a firm grip
and feel the Saber become
a part of yourself.

An extension of
your power as you move with
guidance of the Force.

Placement
1st place
2nd place
Warlord Hades
Member
Warlord Hades
Textual submission

To defend is life
To attack is certain death,
Know which one to use.

Placement
2nd place
Member
Adept Tahiri Thorn Morte Tarentae
Textual submission

Balance and beauty
Lethal or defensive use
Yours be the choice

Placement
3rd place
Member
Nyx Erinyes
Submission
Nyx Erinyes opted out of publishing her submission.
Placement
No placement
Member
Kromtal Bloodfyre Romanae
Textual submission

Crimson blade pierces dark
Exultation, triumph, joy
My lightsaber feeds

Placement
No placement
Member
Sala Fe
Textual submission

Old friend, tried and true
With a blade as dark and deep
Of an ocean's wave blue

Placement
No placement