Competition: Fleshing out the Fleet

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Fleshing out the Fleet
Tarentum has recently replaced it's fleet. We have Ships, we have troops, we have a Command Structure in place, but we are lacking in names and identities for the key NPCs that will command our ships. Create a name, personal history and/or wiki entry for a major NPC from our Fleet. Examples include (but are not limited to) Captain and XO of the Venators (we have two) and the CO of our Legion.

Entries will be graded based on their realism (applying both In-Universe considerations and "earth-military" type considerations - not necessarily US-realism although much of Tarentum military ranks are US-inspired), applicability (to Tarentum and includes potential usefulness as an NPC), and grammar (in a 40/30/30 weighting, graded from 0-5 in each category with a 5 being the best).

Entries must be at least 200 words in length (not counting any markup if a wiki page is created), and must be submited as an actual document to the competition (no links to web pages/documents). All entries are potential canon in the Tarentum military, no entries are guaranteed such distinction.
Competition Information
Organized by
Warlord Pel Tarentae
Running time
2017-08-21 until 2017-09-08 (19 days)
Target Unit
Clan Tarentum
Competition Type
Other
Awards
Third Level Crescents
Participants
4 subscribers, of which 2 have participated.
Results
1st place
Rax Von-Klug
Member
Rax Von-Klug
File submission
Del_Jantsk.docx
Placement
1st place
2nd place
Seer Xolarin
Member
Seer Xolarin
File submission
12845_-_Tarentum_NPCs_-_Xolarin.docx
Textual submission

I have included two, and I'll let you determine which to use if you only take one. The top is probably my favorite, although having a Wookiee as a squad leader on the ship could be interesting. :)

Placement
2nd place